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Until This Photo Was Taken

in sadness i gaze upon your beautiful picture wondering what it is like over there with you in laughter i see your animated face wondering what it feels like to feel an embrace with you in envy i watch you laugh and smile wondering who’s in the background to share this moment with you though these feelings embrace me with twangs of despondency and despair i can’t help but stare at this picture and wish I was there it’s like being with you but… not liking it never thought that was possible until this photo was taken

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Date: 11/19/2012 6:13:00 PM
Beautiful and poignant poem projecting pure loneliness from the soul. I felt the aching of your heart..... and I wonder....Would today's technology make it any easier to be apart. Photographs were great... in their day. Today we can bounce a few signals off a sattellite and feel you can touch each other. ....great write.... Jake
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/20/2012 12:17:00 AM
Lovely comment, and yes, indeed. You are kind to review some of my older works. Much love Always, Laura
Date: 11/2/2011 10:39:00 PM
Dear Laura, I offer belated Congratulations on YOUR win in Brian's Contest - " Let's See Poetry " A well deserved Win Keep Inspiring us lesser POETS LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER... Harry
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:25:00 AM
A belated congratulations Laura on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:08:00 PM
This is one of my favorites I have seen going down the list so far. I love what you are saying. I can imagine seeing a picture like this and having it dawn on me that I actually am jealous! Congrats.
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:24:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this poem Laura.
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Date: 6/25/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your superb win in the contest with this unique entry luv..enjoy top billing for excellent poetry...
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Date: 5/29/2011 12:41:00 AM
Until you looked .. I was an actor of joy With the aching heart inside Until you looked I was a blooming flower With thrones around me Until you looked, I was a living earth With lava burning inside Until you looked, I was lonely soul With no shadows beside With that look I was complete.
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