Until They Were Gone

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I did not notice memories slipping away, until they were gone

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/27/2023 2:18:00 PM

Some are as sweet as a rose bouquet, Sara. Hang on to those. Love, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 4:14:00 PM

I especially like hanging onto the memories we two share. Thanks for reading and commenting love you too, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/20/2023 6:11:00 PM

Ouch! That hurts. -- At least to be given some warning. Perhaps something can be done to stop the memories from slipping, or to slow the pace! ~ Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/27/2023 4:15:00 PM

I agree....wish we could at least slow the pace...thanks for stopping by, Gershon. my best, Sara