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Until My Breath Wings Away

For life and love and summer breeze For memories that fly with ease For days with you that bring to mind The greatest joy that I may find For music that reflects the sun For you and I to be as one For roses that perfume the air as fingers ruffle through your hair For thoughts of peace that fill my heart For knowing we will never part For saying I will always stay Until my breath should wing away

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/26/2022 8:09:00 PM

Simply beautiful Mike! And a big fave for me. Now on to read more of your wonderful poems Cheers Anne :-)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/27/2022 4:04:00 AM

Thank you Anne, I am so glad you you like it !!!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/31/2022 6:22:00 AM

I love this, Mike. Great rhyme, rhythm and beautifully written. Happy Wednesday! Charlie

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2022 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie !!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/18/2022 9:51:00 AM

What a beautiful gift of commitment all wrapped up in lyrical lines. This reminds of wedding vows Mike. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/19/2022 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Sam !!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/15/2022 12:11:00 PM

A beauty of a poem written with love and an intense poetic creative talent - well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/16/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Jennifer xxoo

Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 4:57:00 AM

.......".....I will always stay Until my breath should wing away"- What an emphatic affirmation of love ! Enjoyed reading this love song of deep devotion and passion, Mike !

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/16/2022 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Valsa for your kind words! happy Tuesday xxoo

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/11/2022 12:18:00 PM

For your stalwart strength and joy, expressed in body, soul, mind and spirit. Such sincere devotion, Mike congratulations on your win! ~Anaya

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/11/2022 12:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Anaya!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2022 9:53:00 PM

A symphony of words Mike. Truly beautiful poetry.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/11/2022 4:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Harry!!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 8/10/2022 1:59:00 PM

What medley of sounds and aesthetic mellifluous fusion! A stunning share with lilting spontaneity

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/11/2022 4:30:00 AM

Thank you Silpika !!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2022 11:48:00 AM

Wow! Mike, This is well-written and romantic. I could see this on a hallmark card. Well done. Have a wonderful day-Alexis

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/11/2022 4:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2022 8:28:00 PM

Hold your breath, Mike. Please don't wing away quite yet! Thanks, gw

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/8/2022 5:02:00 AM

I'm holding on GW!!, Happy Monday!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2022 4:12:00 PM

Sweet poem, Mike! Blessings ~ Kim

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 7:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim!

Constance La France

Date: 8/7/2022 2:26:00 PM

Mike, so beautifully penned, not sure for which contest you won but a big deserving congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 7:40:00 PM

Thanks Constance, I appreciate your kind words xxoo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2022 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on this romantic winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 7:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara !!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2022 10:45:00 AM

Mike, CONGRATS on your win with this moving, romantic poem! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 12:36:00 PM

Than you so much Janice !!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/7/2022 6:50:00 AM

This is special and flows like a song. So very nice Mike! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, Happy Sunday xxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 8/6/2022 2:28:00 PM

True Love is eternal and fulfilling. Beautiful words from a beautiful heart. Your poetry exudes love, Mike. Have a great weekend my friend! Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 4:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Bill, Happy Weekend!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2022 10:52:00 AM

The joy a partner brings you certainly makes life worth living Mike. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 4:45:00 AM

Thank you Tom, Happy Sunday!!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/6/2022 9:04:00 AM

Ah, this is so beautiful, Mike. I wish I had someone I could read it to, but, alas, it seems those days are over. I can still have those "thoughts of peace that fill my heart!" Have a marvelous weekend, my friend. This one is P.O.T.D. caliber and a FAVE for me!

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/7/2022 4:45:00 AM

That's so kind, thanks Milt!!