Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

Until My Breath Wings Away

For life and love and summer breeze
                      For memories that fly with ease
For days with you that bring to mind
                     The greatest joy that I may find

For music that reflects the sun
                             For you and I to be as one 
For roses that perfume the air
                  as fingers ruffle through your hair

For thoughts of peace that fill my heart
                       For knowing we will never part
For saying I will always stay
                  Until my breath should wing away

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Anne E Sangster - K September 26, 2022 at 8:09 PM Simply beautiful Mike! And a big fave for me. Now on to read more of your wonderful poems Cheers Anne :-) Mike Gentile September 27, 2022 at 4:04 AM Thank you Anne, I am so glad you you like it !!!

Charles Messina August 31, 2022 at 6:22 AM I love this, Mike. Great rhyme, rhythm and beautifully written. Happy Wednesday! Charlie Mike Gentile September 1, 2022 at 9:16 AM Thank you so much Charlie !!!

Sam Kauffman August 18, 2022 at 9:51 AM What a beautiful gift of commitment all wrapped up in lyrical lines. This reminds of wedding vows Mike. Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Mike Gentile August 19, 2022 at 5:21 AM Thank you so much Sam !!

Jennifer Proxenos August 15, 2022 at 12:11 PM A beauty of a poem written with love and an intense poetic creative talent - well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Mike Gentile August 16, 2022 at 7:30 AM Thanks so much Jennifer xxoo

Valsa George August 12, 2022 at 4:57 AM .......".....I will always stay Until my breath should wing away"- What an emphatic affirmation of love ! Enjoyed reading this love song of deep devotion and passion, Mike ! Mike Gentile August 16, 2022 at 7:31 AM Thank you so much Valsa for your kind words! happy Tuesday xxoo

I Am Anaya August 11, 2022 at 12:18 PM For your stalwart strength and joy, expressed in body, soul, mind and spirit. Such sincere devotion, Mike congratulations on your win! ~Anaya Mike Gentile August 11, 2022 at 12:39 PM Thank you so much Anaya!!!

Harry Horsman August 10, 2022 at 9:53 PM A symphony of words Mike. Truly beautiful poetry. Mike Gentile August 11, 2022 at 4:30 AM Thank you so much Harry!!

Silpika Kalita August 10, 2022 at 1:59 PM What medley of sounds and aesthetic mellifluous fusion! A stunning share with lilting spontaneity Mike Gentile August 11, 2022 at 4:30 AM Thank you Silpika !!!

Alexis Y. August 10, 2022 at 11:48 AM Wow! Mike, This is well-written and romantic. I could see this on a hallmark card. Well done. Have a wonderful day-Alexis Mike Gentile August 11, 2022 at 4:28 AM Thank you so much Alexis xxoo

Gershon Wolf August 7, 2022 at 8:28 PM Hold your breath, Mike. Please don't wing away quite yet! Thanks, gw Mike Gentile August 8, 2022 at 5:02 AM I'm holding on GW!!, Happy Monday!

Kim Rodrigues August 7, 2022 at 4:12 PM Sweet poem, Mike! Blessings ~ Kim Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 7:39 PM Thanks so much Kim!

Constance La France August 7, 2022 at 2:26 PM Mike, so beautifully penned, not sure for which contest you won but a big deserving congratulations, blessings ~Constance Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 7:40 PM Thanks Constance, I appreciate your kind words xxoo

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2022 at 1:30 PM Congratulations on this romantic winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 7:41 PM Thanks so much Sara !!

Janice Canerdy August 7, 2022 at 10:45 AM Mike, CONGRATS on your win with this moving, romantic poem! Janice Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 12:36 PM Than you so much Janice !!

Heidi Sands August 7, 2022 at 6:50 AM This is special and flows like a song. So very nice Mike! :) Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 12:36 PM Thank you Heidi, Happy Sunday xxoo

Bill Baker August 6, 2022 at 2:28 PM True Love is eternal and fulfilling. Beautiful words from a beautiful heart. Your poetry exudes love, Mike. Have a great weekend my friend! Bill Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:46 AM Thanks so much Bill, Happy Weekend!!

Tom Cunningham August 6, 2022 at 10:52 AM The joy a partner brings you certainly makes life worth living Mike. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:45 AM Thank you Tom, Happy Sunday!!

L Milton Hankins August 6, 2022 at 9:04 AM Ah, this is so beautiful, Mike. I wish I had someone I could read it to, but, alas, it seems those days are over. I can still have those "thoughts of peace that fill my heart!" Have a marvelous weekend, my friend. This one is P.O.T.D. caliber and a FAVE for me! Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:45 AM That's so kind, thanks Milt!!

Paulette Calasibetta August 6, 2022 at 8:43 AM How divinely romantic~your rhythm and rhyme flow like the heart of the soul. :)Paulette Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:45 AM Thank you Paulette , Happy Sunday xxoo

Vijay Pandit August 6, 2022 at 7:38 AM Reminiscing romantically in your signature style, Mike. Beautifully done, as always. Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:44 AM Thank you Vijay!!

Unseeking Seeker August 6, 2022 at 6:35 AM An endearing serenade! Mike Gentile August 7, 2022 at 4:44 AM Thank you so much Seeker!!