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Until Leaves Murmur

Two leaves flutter so naturally, wings hanging free… timeless in a swirl on the curving breasts of night. And they dance, dance without talking unto altitudes of orbital light… Somehow, this pair enters into my dazzled world as if to murmur: “We are here, but not for a long, my dear so you must learn our celestial song , unfurl your wings across melodious rivers-- come dance with us ,your beauty fills…” And my hips jut out like an ensemble of dragonflies, butterflies, fireflies towards the same aurora, draped on a grasping-skirt's embrace; arms and limbs circling in shapes unknown... while leaves fade into a hushed midnight call. Resubmitted 9.29.2016 Contest: Any Poem NA'd in September 2016 Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

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Date: 9/30/2016 8:32:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your placement, Nette. Agnes
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:44:00 AM
just lovely Nette, as always lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. Congrats! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:17:00 PM
Nice poem Nette. Best wishes for the contest. Enjoyed the read........// hugs
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:02:00 PM
I love the Autumn, and find it so inspirational. I really enjoy the image of dancing with the leaves, trying to connect with them on a level beyond simple observation. This was a beautiful expression of connectedness to nature. Best of luck in the contest, and an easy 7 from me. =) -G
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Date: 9/18/2016 2:49:00 PM
- A beautiful poem that touches my heart, Nette - I wish you luck in the contest - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:58:00 AM
Sounds pretty erotic! So much passion in those two leaves, nette. My imagination is blushing:)
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful images ... Rich content ... Great ...
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Date: 9/18/2016 3:24:00 AM
I can definitely feel the dance of passion in every part of this. The spontaneous energy and leaf-twirling from this poem are contagious!
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