Until It's Twilight's Time

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*Image of Setting Sun by Pixabay. Until It's Twilight's Time As golden swallows tumble by, A summer sun had set a score, Tempest at will a dropping sky, A closing net none dare ignore, Until a moon shut day star ore. 2022 February 01

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Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2022 4:02:00 AM

Much beauty trapped in brevity ! The flaming sun plunging into the depths, a net enclosing the Earth with the Moon and stars coming to occupy the sky. Lovely images ! Best of Luck dear friend !

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/2/2022 10:08:00 AM

You are right on top of things, Valsa, cluing in on the relevant topics exposed and their opportunities that individually entertain every prospectus differently according to their specific purpose my friend, Aloha!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/1/2022 11:30:00 AM

Excellent poem William. I enjoyed this :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2022 5:06:00 PM

Heidi, so kind and sweet of you to share my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2022 11:03:00 AM

Wow, William, what a wonderful metaphor and eloquence in this well-crafted poem. I'm increasingly delighted by your admirable poetry, my friend. Kindest regards.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2022 5:05:00 PM

A terse verse indeed that I had neatly wrapped up tight, Lasaad, with my gracious gratitudes for your generous expressions my friend, Aloha!