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Until I Met You

as the rain pitter patters down my sill, I think of our August picnics along the shore- the days when our nutrients were nourished, and stardust fell upon our lips as we kissed. for there is no way to the exit sign when you're in love- no hunger that can't be satisfied. I never knew how thirsty I was, until you quenched me... March 8, 2018

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Date: 1/8/2019 3:01:00 PM
I like the first two lines of the second stanza. Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2018 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments here! Very well expressed, thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/8/2018 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful romantic poem, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/9/2018 7:42:00 AM
thank you lovely Line :)-luloo
Date: 3/8/2018 1:27:00 PM
What a wonderful play on words.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/9/2018 7:41:00 AM
many thanks dear DM ;)-luloo
Date: 3/8/2018 11:32:00 AM
This is so nice and the ending is excellent :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/9/2018 7:41:00 AM
many thanks dear Heidi :) -luloo
Date: 3/8/2018 11:17:00 AM
Such a beautiful love poem, I love the imagery of quenching thirst for love.. it's perfectly described. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/9/2018 7:41:00 AM
thank yo very much Juli :) -luloo

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