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Unshaped

I could overload, I could underwhelm I'm the wrong person for a job at the helm Throw me to the lions, it's all I'm owed I could underwhelm, I could overload It's a riddle today, as I sit all uneasy I'm all together bothered, not at all breezy Cannot articulate what I'd like to say As I sit all uneasy, it's a riddle today Banish me to a tower, let me out when I sing Reward and punishment an untried thing I need shaping up by an external power Let me out when I sing, banish me to a tower I sink or swim, there's no treading water I am the child of a reckless daughter Fix myself up by sailing off on a whim There's no treading water, I sink or swim

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Date: 6/17/2024 12:06:00 PM
strong lines, powerful contrasts, catchy title (good hook) - i like the way this plays out
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Date: 6/17/2024 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Mat, as I'm not prolific at commenting I don't get too much feedback on the site to what does or doesn't land well so it's nice to hear this was hitting the mark. Thanks for stopping by :)

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