Unshackle My Verse:

When Rhyme was a crime:


I send all my kites in metaphorical rhyme, So the screws can't decipher them in time. I hang low compared to all the other inmates, Passing my time until I walk through the gates. Guilty as charged for being a lowly old poet, Serving five to eight years, wouldn't you know it. While I spend my time etching on the wall, The hours pass slowly waiting for my muse to call. I received a kite from the cell next door, It said, "keep your head low there'll be a gang war." This prison full of poets from all walks of life, For the pen is mightier than the deadliest knife. We only get released for one hour a day, Talking in the yard in our own poetic way. But don't let the screws catch you speaking in verse, Or else you're likely to leave in a long black hearse.
(The letters prisoners send each other are called kites) (And screws are guards) April~13~2017 For Unshackle my verse contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues.
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Chaudhary Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 11:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations.
Cresswell Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Imagination or reality no insult intended, just curious. It is a sad poem for poets are jailed in many places in reality. Mostly for telling the truth. This poem is very descriptive of the mind set in prison. I appreciate a good write.
Wolf Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Haha, imagination! Thank you /|\
Dutta Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Big Congrats to win top.
Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 9:43 PM
You are too kind, thank you, Anisha /|\
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Hi Rick, I don't know how I missed this one. You did an excellent job with the contest theme. " For the pen is mightier than the deadliest knife." Is such a powerful line. I see why your in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis /|\
Roper Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 9:25 PM
White Wolf, enjoy.. congratulations on your win ~*
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Thank you kindly, Eve /|\
Pett Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win White Wolf, great couplet, enjoyed. :))
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Thanks a bunch, Roy /|\
May Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Congrats on your win WW
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph /|\
Green Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 12:07 PM
I knew what screws meant, I an old movie fan but the kites threw me, but now I know. Congrats Rick on your win. This was very cool.
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 6:11 PM
I knew when I read yours, Chris, that you would get top honours, Thank you, and congrats to you too mate /|\
Krampe Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:55 AM
"For the pen is mightier than the deadliest knife." Yes. Congrats on your win! (And thanks for explaining screws and kites; I did not understand at first)
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Haha, my pleasure! And thank you for your comment, Agnes /|\
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest, White Wolf! Sending poetic letters - don't get caught! Loved this!
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Thank you very much, Kim /|\
Vinson Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 8:29 PM
At least let us have the moon shining through the bars.
Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 8:43 PM
I'll drink to that, Doug! /|\
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:02 AM
I knew about the screws but not about the kites! So glad your poetry is flying high WW good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 3:28 AM
Yes, I thought that was common knowledge, but apparently not! Thanks, Jan /|\
Trifiatis Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 2:05 AM
A very interesting perspective of poets my friend, WW, that in many occasions are not far from the truth! Certainly 7!
Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 2:09 AM
Thanks, Demetrios! This one I only wrote for a contest /|\
White Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 2:04 AM
wow, wonderful my friend! I didn't know about kites, I love to learn new things..... Good luck in the contest. (And now I am off to work on our poem ;)
Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 2:07 AM
Thanks, Duir! Have fun with it matey /|\
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