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orange and gray warm and cool competing in the sunset sky unsettled like relationships gone awry

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/28/2023 2:17:00 PM

Your beautiful words, dear Sara, eloquently capture the unpredictable nature of both relationships and nature itself. It is a wonderful and poetic way to explore such a captivating theme. Your writing not only warms the soul but also provides valuable insights and knowledge. It is truly inspiring to read your poem. Wish you a wonderful weekend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 2:27:00 PM

Wow! Thank you for your meaningful and insightful comments. You're quite right, relationships and nature are unpredictable on one hand yet oddly predictable on the other. I'm grateful my writing warms your soul. Your poems and your comments inspire me. Grateful for you, dear poet friend. Hope you have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 2:58:00 AM

Yeap i know so many in such relationships, and amazing isnt it how we can compare and find traces of our experiences in the sky and nature all around, like how you’ve described here, orange and grey competing in the night sky! Gosh! You have a deep mindset, and so very artistic too! And i can see that whenever i read you! Reading you is soul warming and a learning experience! So inspiring! Love this one and the picture too used here.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:32:00 AM

dearest Ink--thank you for your insightful words. I agree..if we look we can see traces of our life's experiences in nature. I'm humbled by your comments, but am grateful for them. I'm glad you find my poems soul warm and inspirational. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!! have a great weekend, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 10/27/2023 7:52:00 PM

I lenjoyed this poem, Sara! Warmth and cool competing- very original! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/28/2023 4:33:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Paige. I'm grateful you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate your ongoing support. Have a pleasant Saturday, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2023 4:03:00 PM

What a great way to speak poetically on that beautiful picture of contest. I like this a lot

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 5:09:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Andrea. I appreciate your kind words. I'll need to check out the contest. have a pleasant evening, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/27/2023 3:59:00 PM

A wonderful poem my friend. Relationships and nature. Both are impossible to predict.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 5:09:00 PM

Your words are wise and insightful, Jerry. Thanks for stopping by. Hope you have a splendid weekend, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/27/2023 2:41:00 PM

nicely expressed fragment of thought complete with the perfect photo -

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/27/2023 2:47:00 PM

thanks, Mat, for stopping by...yes, the thought was fragmented when it came to me. I'm glad you liked it, though. Have a pleasant evening, Sara