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Unseen Valentine

Well, it's Valentine's And I still haven't got an answer back I want to see you, But you are yet to have time I just want to be with you And cherish our time together But of course life gets in the way My hopelessly romantic feelings Always get my hopes too high And I fall every time they are crushed And it's not your fault at all, You are doing your best But I can't help but feel this way When all I want is to be By your side and embrace you Like I've wanted to since I first got to know you Have a sweet Valentine's, my love I hope yours is better than mine Written on February 16, 2021 2nd place in Valentine sponsored by Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 3/1/2021 8:25:00 PM
Hi Dylan, I found your write to be real and bit sad. Many folk are alone, longing for their Valentine. Congratulations on your win. Have a great win:-) Alexis
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Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 3/1/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thank you! I just wanted show a different side of Valentines that not everyone sees. Thank you again for reading!
Date: 3/1/2021 7:14:00 AM
I like that you presented the other side of Valentines Day. It can be a very difficult time for people. Congrats on your second place finish.
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Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 3/1/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thank you! I like showing all sides of things, like I did with this. Thank you again for reading!

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