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How shall we begin? I'll do my best to fit in, transcending silhouette, minimalistic. Expressive curves, pause for a second, what is it that you've seen? Move in, embrace. Balance erased, no longer in control, unexpected, this has become too close. Far too much black on the palette, the seemingly endless interval. What unfolds in this place? Time has come for the unveiling, soft lips. Mind silent, let it happen body! Thank you, you might emerge unscathed from this. Feel their intention to the best of your ability, I do not dishearten one's opportunity. Eyes fixed, it's all you, lost all that I knew, I shan't let go. Thrust of the hips, alright, alright, material is worn, realign oneself. Future paths collide with force, time to bring laughter into the picture. Softens any blow to either party. The ringing of the bell, time's unpredicted savior. Left alone, I miss the past, whatever's a new knowing that is unfair on you. Am I doing wrong? What has been has gone, continued new age torture, adapted, it's all just yesterday. Closing of doors I lay, her voice, "you know you want it." I am lost on the answers but I will be okay, as long as you are. Undertow... I see through it More important things left unseen, you're right, I got distracted

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Date: 2/25/2024 2:37:00 PM
I am a poet that calls a spade a spade from the get go, no hidden meanings, I have trouble deciphering poems that aren't so. Its my failing. However I like this poem Lee. It's sensual. It has a sultry feel as I read. I hope this was your aim and I am not reading more into it than was intended. I like your poem Lee. It has a spontaneity about it that makes it interesting. Best wishes from Wen
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Date: 2/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the read. Your interpretation aligns well and your words mean a lot. Best wishes to you too.

Book: Shattered Sighs