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Frozen beauty hides
In the untrodden places
Known only to God.





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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/11/2010 5:12:00 AM

Perfection! Thanks for sharing. Love, Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations Joyce, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! I love the spiritual feeling in this poem. Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:52:00 PM

oh,my goodness. I would have placed this one even higher. I loved the message in this one so much. LUv and congrats. Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 10:04:00 AM

A nice Honor Mentioned, Joyce. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 3/4/2010 7:46:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku...Congratulations on your win...Marty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:51:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Joyce! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations Joyce, I do like your work lots. Robert

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:36:00 PM

Joyce, your haiku has a beautiful spiritual feel to it and I wish you congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Blessings, Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:34:00 PM

Dear Joyce, My warm congratulations to you on your win in the contest! Enjoy it! And thanks always for your kind comments.

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:36:00 AM

Joyce, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:54:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a beautiful Haiku... enjoy this special win .. for a multi talented poetess..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Joyce. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:47:00 AM

Joyce, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2010 10:44:00 AM

Great Haiku that is very descriptive and expressive. If for a contest , sure to be a winner. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2010 6:12:00 PM

Love this Haiku Joyce. Yes indeed God does have beauty hidden in every form. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/28/2010 12:35:00 PM

ice princess? :) is this for the contest?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 9:05:00 PM

SOUP MAIL...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 8:59:00 PM

OH Joyce I luv this .. if for Raul's contest..good luck..its lovely.. thankxxx for your blog comment tonight.. see Soup Mail in a few minutes..if I don't get knocked off site like last night... about your dilemma..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2010 5:09:00 PM

Oh,my goodness, one of the best I have seen yet for this contest. WoW, and I hope you place very high with this one! andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/27/2010 1:57:00 PM

I smell a winner! I love "untrodden places"..BG