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Can’t stand to be Without you today There were so many things Left unsaid, left undone Last night shouldn’t Have been cut short I miss you so that I ache Quivering Shivering Time should have stood still The night should not have ended We should have gone on forever AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on June 21, 2019 for contest YOUR CHOICE (12) LOVE VERSE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 7/5/2019 6:50:00 PM
Such love...I once had that. Lovely poem Line. Congrats on the win. Susan
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Date: 7/5/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.
Date: 6/24/2019 9:44:00 AM
wonderful lines of love.
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Date: 6/24/2019 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Janis.
Date: 6/23/2019 4:13:00 PM
The first four lines - whisked me away to the days of Spencer Tracy and Katherine Hepburn. Beautifully done, Line! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/23/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thanks for your delightful visit and compliment, Gershon.
Date: 6/22/2019 9:52:00 AM
Congrats Line-- your poem speaks for all true lovers.
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Date: 6/22/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, LJ.
Date: 6/22/2019 8:24:00 AM
If only we could turn back time...great entry Line...bol...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2019 6:23:00 PM
Deep longing of the heart, powerfully expressed. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 6/21/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, WA.
Date: 6/21/2019 10:54:00 AM
Best wishes from Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2019 9:28:00 AM
Well said! I hope you are well! It is hard, I know.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrew.
Date: 6/21/2019 8:14:00 AM
So powerfully penned Line! My best to you in the contest. xomo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2019 6:30:00 AM
A gorgeously done poem, my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.

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