Unrest of Spirit-Lead Laden Broken Heart

Unrest of Spirit Lead Laden Broken Heart Hammered heart’s fragments, lead laden, falling deeply in abyss. Down to the rock bottom, life completely … amiss. Shaft of ‘incandescence’ light rays, filter into dark hole. Fragments slowly begin to rise, returned … completely whole. Unrest of Spirit Dec. 6, 2018 Contest sponser: Julia Ward

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 10/24/2020 6:27:00 AM

It is nice to see this heart recovered, not all broken hearts make it back . . . : )

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 10/24/2020 6:53:00 AM

Thank you for visiting. I had forgotten I wrote this. I will be visiting you also. Hope you have a whole heart. Thank you

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2018 10:38:00 AM

Barbara, deep and quite wonderful, well done and best of luck in the contest ~

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 5/28/2019 11:20:00 PM

I just saw you commented on this. Forgive me for not thanking you earlier..Never looked to see if placed, haven't been on soup since wrote this .I guess I didn't place, but gladI was reminded I wrote this. I'll visit you. Thanks