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Unrequited.

He did not love her, yet she adored him. For the naive soul who fell all alone, Ablaze with a fiery yearn for him, Her Fondness met with a heart of cold stone. Wept as the fire died, saw embers of him. The embers burnt black, and she became scarred. Discovered merely hatred within him, The truth was unveiled and her heart was charred. To be lonely in love is to suffer, No solace in solitude it is grim, Dreams are lonely with only one owner, She wants to share her dream of love with him. To love him, to love you, is all I ask Let my heart find peace and remove my mask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 12:02:00 PM
Heartfelt piece here brave write Daniel well done welcome to the soup.
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:35:00 AM
This is absolutly beautiful <3
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:42:00 AM
Mask.. Great originality.. Soupmail me.
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:39:00 AM
This is brilliant <3 My heart speaks the same notes, once upon a time, this was the tale i told. Though now happiness speaks on my soul.
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Date: 1/20/2010 10:46:00 AM
WOW! Amazing. i loveeeeeeeee It!
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Date: 1/20/2010 5:44:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Isabella. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2010 8:32:00 PM
Welcome.....A lovely sonnet of longing. It was a pleasure to read.....Margaret
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:42:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. as this delightful Sonnet tonight.. especially enjoyed your emotion... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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