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Unreality Check

He’s a nightmare killer Who’s killed many times After reality fades he commits many crimes He loves that feeling of power over the people he kills and the colour of their blood that he mercilessly spills There’s no rhyme or reason for who he attacks The bodies just disappear no need to cover his tracks During his daylight hours he’s mild mannered it seems That other person he’s afraid of the one that lives in his dreams He’s anxious to fall asleep because in slumber he won’t care There will comfort in their pain a pleasurable nightmare In the morning when he rises he fears he will be caught But a man can’t be found guilty for the things he has thought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/1/2021 9:58:00 AM
Really gripping write. Got me engrossed. First half mind of a killer perfectly captured, as I read further I smiled. Many of us think but don't act beyond that. Glad it wasn't real.
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Date: 12/6/2020 11:31:00 PM
Didn't expect that ending! Oh... glad it wasn't reality for him. I was living the fear though... good job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thanks, hugs Rick.
Date: 12/4/2020 2:07:00 PM
Hopefully people that have these thoughts and dreams will never act on them. Excellent write Rick. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thanks again Cecilia. Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/30/2020 12:57:00 PM
Macabre indeed... you never cease to amaze my friend. Your twists are always unexpected! Hope you've been well Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2020 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Flo, so nice to see you.
Date: 11/28/2020 3:36:00 PM
Very macabre good poem, Richard. It really extra chilled the November air. Psychological ink thrillers are Vertigo pulse scary good. Excellent write ... top-notch poetry! Love and happy holidays.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2020 2:42:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 11/28/2020 10:15:00 AM
Great write my friend. but people like that, tend to have little conscience. we all think different. and some are wired up wrong., It's hard for people to get their head around, because, we have our own rules and morals, and ethics. We often choose our path. well penned. Take care.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2020 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Peter.
Date: 11/28/2020 9:47:00 AM
Hmmm... interesting poem, how many have sadistic thoughts but do not act upon them, never mind the murderers, its the pedophiles, who have not acted upon their urges, that worries me the most..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2020 10:56:00 AM
It’s the quiet ones that you sometimes have to watch out for. :0)
Date: 11/28/2020 9:45:00 AM
Richard, chilling and wonderfully penned, sadly there are people like this in the world, and one day those thoughts will be reality _Constance
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Constance. Hopefully his thoughts won’t come to pass. ;0)
Date: 11/28/2020 9:33:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Richard, hopefully that's where his crimes stay, in nightmares. Hope you're well. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Tom. No idea how this popped in my head. Just taking the pen where it chooses to go.
Date: 11/28/2020 9:25:00 AM
Hi Richard, yes it's lucky we can't be prosecuted for our thoughts, then we would probably all be in jail~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2020 11:01:00 AM
That is true. Some people like scary and dark movies. It’s a form of escapism. It doesn’t mean they are predisposed to violent behaviour. Myself I prefer comedy/Drama.

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