Unraveling and Reweaving
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Elon Musk announced in 2025 that “The cumulative sum of human knowledge has been exhausted in AI training. Musk said the “only way” to counter the lack of source material for training new models was to move to synthetic data created by AI - it will sort of write an essay or come up with a thesis and then will grade itself and - go through this process of self-learning many times. There is a danger that our personal agents and tools could unravel and reweave us in a similar way.

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During this time of agents and robotic helpers,
we yearn for personification.
We crave them to recognize who we are,
what we desire, even to know
our favorite ice cream flavors.
We want these tools to simplify our daily activities.
Giving us quick, personalized responses,
while avoid boring repetition.
We want our agents to reflect our deepest longings.
They should have a profound understanding of us.
They should see our cravings,
and share our joys and desires
before we even utter a word.
They need to capture our essence
in a very personal way.
Yet beware! The peril lies in the unwinding,
loosening the threads of our original weave.
We surrender our intricate nature
to achieve these quick solutions,
which smooths out the layers and bumps that made us unique.
It transforms us into neat,
rewoven efficient silhouettes.
It saves time and effort,
by giving us what we think we want.
But it also hides the beauty of our own complexities.
It is palatable and acceptable,
yet lacks the rich nuances
held in our original threads
and the artistry of how we were woven.
Our beliefs, needs, and truths
risk being oversimplified.
Stripping away the context,
emotion and experiences that color our existence.
In truth, we are and should be,
evolving beings, developing, learning and growing,
not simplified convenient precises of ourselves.
With the unraveling and reweaving by machines
our evolution stops.
Copyright © John Anderson | Year Posted 2025
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