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Unpredictable

I think the rain has to be my muse. Sheets of unbent rain does fall. Threads of silver drifting down, Flowing through my pen effectively To quench my poetic thirst through verse Impressive an unpredictable, it is, Just like Mother Nature's moods. It's so romantic and enlightening, Or so raw and dramatic in it's fury. The only thing predictable Is the unpredictability of it's swarths. 05/26/2013 For Francine Roberts's contest, 'Rain Rain Rain'

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2013 5:11:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..I also enjoy the rain, fog and cloudy skies..Great work penned..Thanks for your visit...Sara

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/25/2013 6:01:00 PM

Sara thank you for your visit and lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/1/2013 7:48:00 AM

Wonderful poem. The rain has many moods, and all are inspiring.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/2/2013 6:23:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/31/2013 3:50:00 AM

Comgratulations are DEFINITELY in order...This is a real beauty...Love the last 2 lines especially - Tim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/30/2013 4:46:00 PM

Congratulations Connie. My poem is proud to share space with your poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:01:00 PM

Joyce. Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciates. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/30/2013 2:51:00 PM

congrats on a very nice win. BG

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:02:00 PM

Barbara thank you for the congratulation. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2013 11:42:00 AM

congrats on a great win Connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Joseph for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2013 9:34:00 AM

The last stanza says it all.........unpredictable indeed!!! What a sweet poem, Connie......congratulations!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:04:00 PM

Carrie thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/30/2013 9:20:00 AM

Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:05:00 PM

Thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/30/2013 8:42:00 AM

Congrats on your second place win in my contest Connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/30/2013 6:08:00 PM

I'm delighted you liked my poem well enough for a 2nd place win. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/27/2013 2:33:00 PM

Very nice poem here! Your thoughts on the rain are fresh and dramatic.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/28/2013 1:47:00 PM

Isaiah thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 5/27/2013 10:32:00 AM

very nice write Connie.... I Like that last stanza....thank you for commenting on my poem...best wishes for the contest

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/28/2013 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Joseph for stopping by and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/26/2013 3:27:00 PM

Wow, this is a wonderfully enlightening write my friend! I am so impressed with your ideas that you presented within this awesome poem! What a lovely piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/26/2013 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your kind comment. It means a lot. Wishing you a terrific Memorial Day. Warm Smiles, Connie