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The Unpredictability of Plastic Bags

Sometime in the middle of the night "cat X" curled up behind my knees. It was too dark to see which one it was. Early next morning "cat X" suddenly bit my hand. Sauntered out the bedroom door. It was the little black and white one-the unpredictable one. The stray we'd rescued years before. At the edge of a windblown field. Curled tight in a plastic bag- barely breathing. Looking down at my bitten hand. So pale, and wrinkled. Unpredictable, like a plastic bag at the edge of a windblown field.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/11/2019 1:55:00 AM
cat X "unpredictable like a plastic bag at the edge of a windblown life!"// excellent
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:09:00 PM
Wasn't expecting that at all... Such wisdom and forgiveness you have shown in so few words.
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Date: 9/9/2019 8:29:00 AM
Very cool write...much enjoyed and the narrative is treated in an original way.
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:48:00 PM
"Cat" and "Unpredictable" are synonyms. Love the title and the story, of course.
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Date: 3/21/2017 5:30:00 PM
Did I read this right? One of the cats died ? Oh.. so sad. darn that plastic bag. This is a very good poetry.Anthony.
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