Unplanted

Plant parched in the sun Let me water and nourish Lush leaves will return

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/10/2023 2:56:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Dilly I'll be following your poetry now, hope you'll pay mine a visit too. A poet friend (to be) in Texas, Bill

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/11/2023 12:58:00 AM

Thanks Bill, will do

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2023 2:50:00 AM

Good one Dilly - never known 2 weeks of sunshine during TT, I'm having to water the strawberry plants daily ... but the reward of strawberries forming is coming to fruition:-) hugs Jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/10/2023 2:53:00 AM

By strawberry plants are lagging behind Jan - although I think someone might be watering them on my behalf. It's best if I plant stuff out and let it decide for itself if it wants to live x

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/9/2023 10:34:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/9/2023 10:37:00 PM

Thanks Jeanette