Unloved

I am surrounded by total darkness I hide in the shadows Afraid of the deadly silence I am vulnerable and weak I am alone in this cruel world Facing anger, violence, hate and fear When I cry no one hears No one wants to hear No one cares My cuts will heal But emotionally I am damaged My life is a living hell I want to break free I pray for a better life But it is impossible, I am nothing I do not deserve anything I am the scum of the earth I know this, everyone has told me My loneliness is killing me I long for somebody, anybody, a friend I am unloved

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/18/2017 2:33:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, you certainly need someone in your life to improve it, but remember the world is very cruel, they try to crush you, humilate you, so always try to be brave in front of them never show any sign of weakness, actually i prefer crying alone so that no body knows it, I don t want peoples to know that I cry, but I truly wish from heart that you find someone who ll totally change your life however I m new and wanted you to read my poems and tell me how you feel about them

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2010 9:20:00 PM

really moving in a way i have been there.. hope you are fine Amy.. have anice one,..p.d.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/5/2010 6:08:00 AM

WOW I FEEL ALL YOUR WORDS IN EVERYONE OF YOUR POEMS THANK YOU [DUNCAN]