Universe

for centuries we admired you from afar soon to stain our vision © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/6/2019 2:54:00 PM

Imagery amazing - a really thought provoking Monoku - one that comes to mind often! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/13/2019 2:21:00 PM

oh, love this - read it twice. great work

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2019 9:17:00 AM

Profound one liner.. We have admired it and destroyed it.. sadly..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/25/2019 8:02:00 PM

Let us treat it with kindness, it is ours to create and love

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/25/2019 4:41:00 PM

Man is making his own destiny...unwisely! A great monoku Harry! : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2019 4:33:00 PM

dim forecast yet so real as our world is drowning, drying, dying... powerful line, harry!...huggs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/25/2019 2:24:00 PM

Is this a dire forecast or poetic vision..either way, you wrote a unique poem, Harry. The universe is expanding mightily ..who know where it takes us?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2019 12:02:00 PM

Indeed, deep and thought-provoking, Harry. Technology seems to have brought everything closer and there are now plans to colonize Mars. Perhaps our vision of an unsullied universe will change as we venture forth. Hope the lessons we learn on Earth help us to choose wisely in the future. Hugs, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 1/25/2019 8:11:00 AM

Harry, love a monoku that I have to think about, this made me pause, of course I realize a monoku can have many meanings to different readers. As I see it, the universe is turning on us Earthlings, with the sole purpose of destruction and we can see this happening now with the floods, quakes, fires, tornadoes, hurricanes, mud slides, the bitter cold temperatures or the too hot temperatures, etc etc ~