Universal Light

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Aurora borealis on the Norway. Green northern lights above mountains ...

Riding a beam of universal light. The heavens are luminous, every night. Interpreted through fear a blinding bright, Filtered through Love it provides great insight. Is it better to give, than to receive? First try it, then tell me what you believe. Be honest with others, never deceive, A life worth living, you’ll surely achieve.

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John Loving Iii

Date: 7/17/2025 5:41:00 PM

How do you reward glory and see the thing that lights. They both tell a story of a successful life

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 6:39:00 PM

Amen, John. Thanks for the visit and comment. I'll visit your poetry soon. Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/17/2025 10:08:00 AM

I enjoy the hope in your poem. Light covers the earth and we can find it.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 6:40:00 PM

If we look / seek, we will find. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/17/2025 7:56:00 AM

Bill sounds like good advice to me. We must have a lot of very needy people who were not loved when they were children. It might explain a lot. However, if they could actually try it, they would find out joy is possible. You've composed something profound indeed. Smiles!!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 6:41:00 PM

Thank you for your insightful comments, Duke. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2025 4:33:00 AM

So very insightful and inspiring ! I have experienced greater joy in giving than in receiving. Honesty is a great virtue. Deceit is despicable. If we practice honesty and faithfulness, our life will have heaven's light. Have a lovely week ahead dear Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 6:38:00 PM

I agree with your comment, Valsa. Light and Love to you, my dear friend. Bill

Sara Baker

Date: 7/16/2025 4:43:00 PM

I appreciate the brevity of your insightful words, Bill. I especially liked the first stanza. hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:14:00 PM

Thanks, me. Hugs for you, from me.