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United We Stand

All these things no one has seen And everything I've see in the in-between. Wake me when the nightmare ends and my real life begins. Kiss me softly upon these breathless lips of lover's whispers. A tale so surreal many wouldn't believe if not for these words born to paper. Come to dance on the stage of life. Embraced within heaven's grand design. The destiny of two souls brought from the trenches of hell's depth's of damnation inferno. Flesh, body, and our human life. Hold not the lost translation of my minds entangled worries from the bellow of my broken soul. Look for the light within the eyes taken by the journey my worn out shoes smoldering from heartache's toll. Beyond the pain illuminating from deep inside my heart of feelings felt for no one before there was you. Oh turn around before you loose the light of your beautiful soul, I once saw in you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/25/2016 11:47:00 PM
Rachael Barron, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/6/2015 1:29:00 AM
RACHEAEL, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/3/2009 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Rachael,this says a lot about what you have seen and gone through.Very profound and great expressions.Welcome to poetry soup. Best wishes Chacko
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Date: 9/29/2009 10:40:00 AM
This is amazing!!! Far better than anything I've ever written. I admire this poem with the utmost enthusiasm, love. I look forward to reading anything else you post. James
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Date: 9/29/2009 4:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rachael. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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