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'uninvited'

a smile chatter that went on for hours new friends were made in between all the fun a little love crept in unnoticed uninvited so what do you do? pretend it does not exist? knowing this goes way beyond platonic 110920111635

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/17/2011 6:10:00 PM

Hmmm, sometimes acceptance is the best way. Like you say, it sneaks up on you.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/1/2011 3:23:00 PM

Clever thought provoking piece, Wilma. There's no easy answer to that one! Have a great weekend : ) lfde Many congrats on your wins, of course

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/18/2011 5:47:00 PM

Well put thoughts Wilma, enjoyed this piece you have created..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2011 2:07:00 AM

New love may be "uninvited," but don't make the mistake of pretending it doesn't exist, Wilma. You could end up living with a lot of regrets. Very nice work here -- obviously thought provoking. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/11/2011 9:41:00 PM

Something precious to hold on to. Lovely verse Wilma. LOve takes many forms.

David Williams

Date: 9/11/2011 1:26:00 PM

hey Wilma, love sneaks in when we least expect it...David

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/11/2011 11:57:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* “Isn't That The Way Love Sometimes Unfolds My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Wilma! *^_^* When We Often Least Expect It * Wham * Head Over Heels, My Dear &, Very Sweet!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *