Unheard Voices

After a cacophony of ramblings, day bows gently--- Infants slumber with ease in cradles, lanterns flicker above tavern stools as mellow winds drift around gold-hued roads paving the way for flights of quietude: Somehow, mothers hush their loved ones to tend angel dreams before sunglow ascends… while elders pat loyal dogs in tenements far from home: And young girls close overused iPods, widows reminisce; single fathers unlock the fence, tired— Somehow, heartbroken women lay on empty chairs alone, Lovers fondle sigh deeply relieved. This is nightfall. Its language of voices breathes through different tones, climbing into our hearts where we exhale syllabic pain and glory, until robin-wings unravel our incantations to liberate us against hidden wails. ~ For PD's Impress Me with an Old Poem (002) Contest Written 12/2018 ,S.O. Resubmitted 10/7/2020
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Roper Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette , love your imagery in your poem. Hugs Eve
Alexander Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations. A beautiful poem
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:04 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Nette :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Enjoyed reading, Nette, a marvelous with great imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Excellent poem Nette, congrats. :)
One Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 9:36 AM
This poem is very deep and that is a brilliant last stanza, love the line about nightfall being a language of voice... Great poem Nette.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
May Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Very nice ending Nette..Very nicely rendered,,
Radke Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Oh, Nette. This is so wondrous. I love, especially, your second stanza. You have captured the essence of night through many voices. Best of luck in the contest. Deb
Green Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Nette, your heart and your talent glow brightly in this wonderful poem. Your words are what ring true each and every time I stop by.
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful verse nette, sometimes we listen but cannot hear them. Tom
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December 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Simply beautiful, the lines flow so well in this poem.
Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Wow! Ang galing! I really admire your poetic heart, revealed thru your words and style. I always read your poems .... since I started in PS (April of this year). God bless you.
Pandit Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Day bows gently...and the real work begins to take care of the loved ones..tired..alone. The essence of your poem I found in these lines:This is nightfall. Its language of voices breathes through different tones, climbing into our hearts. And everybody can relate to that. Well done, nette. My very best to you for a TOP win.
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