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Ungava

UNGAVA In blackness a lone star jewel Hangs over the tent in crepuscule. Dark fingers creep over the snowy biers: Ungava’s cold shoulder is not for tears. Lengthening shadows form the dying day: Night stretches eternal across the bay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Note Quebec’s Ungava Peninsula is one of the least hospitable regions on earth, especially in winter. ..................................................................................... Entered in Rick Parise's Contest 5 ~ 8 Line Poetry / Any Theme

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Date: 12/20/2011 4:58:00 PM
GREAT imagery of this frigid dark zone. I'm so glad not to be THERE. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/19/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulation on your win with placement. bl
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations enjoyed this. Well written x
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Date: 12/18/2011 3:21:00 PM
wow..very intersting! i love learning things..you know i think that maybe some kind of liquor too? hmmm Congrad's on your win! Happy Holy Days
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Date: 12/18/2011 1:51:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, I always enjoy reading your poems, so eloquent and polished they are, and thank you for your inspiring comments on my work :-)
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Date: 12/14/2011 7:44:00 AM
Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Sidney. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 1:11:00 PM
If you were going for desolate, well done. It reads cold.
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