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Unfounded Hatred Toward a Young Stranger

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"What's it all about, Alfie?"

"Unfounded Hatred Toward a Young Stranger" describes a grim scene in a New York City subway station, focusing on the interactions and silent hostilities between strangers. An older man holds intense disdain for a younger man due to his foreign accent. The poem explores themes of unfounded hatred and inner conflicts, illustrating how strangers can hate each other without meeting.

The turning point occurs when the young man tragically falls onto the subway tracks and is killed. This shocking event reveals the fragility of life and momentarily unites the other strangers in their shared horror. The poem uses this tragic incident to highlight the senselessness of hatred and discrimination, suggesting that our judgments can be based on baseless biases and assumptions. The ending leaves the older man with regret and an empty space where his anger once resided, implying the need for reflection on our attitudes toward others.


 

The subway station heaves with muffled noise, The shuffle of countless feet against the grime, I am aware of unfounded disdain, Coursing between strangers in the city's bowels. The ancient fluorescents blink in yellow strobe, Casting faint light on self-assuring cries and whispers, Where breathy sighs of pity mingle with laughter That hides like vermin in the concrete seams. The old man's stare, bitter, unwavering, Follows the young man with a foreign tongue, Each syllable grating on his weary ears, Each word a puncture in his sense of self. The tracks beneath pulsate with distant rhythm, An electric hum heralding trains, And all around, unseen but felt, Silent inner pleas for the world to be as I see it and want it to be. The young man's cap is tilted with casual ease, His eyes bright, unguarded, full of tomorrow, While the old man's grip tightens on his cane, Knuckles white with a lifetime's anger. And then, a sudden scream and rush, The young man trips, stumbles, and falls, A quick descent into the void below, His body meets the rails with a sickening thud. The old man flinches, a breath caught in his throat, The echoes of horror ripple through the crowd, The subway station halts, a silence heavy, As the train screeches, too late to stop. The old man's eyes, now wide with shock, No longer see the young man's accent, Only the lifeless form where he once stood, The shadowed truth beneath all their words. The strangers around draw closer, Their differences momentarily blurred, In the shared reality of what they've witnessed, A grim reminder of fleeting, fragile life. The old man turns away, his heart a twisted knot, The anger replaced with a somber void, The self-assurance crumbles like brittle stone, Leaving only questions with no clear answers.

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Date: 4/25/2024 5:07:00 PM
what a tragic event!! Your poem underscores the senseless horror that comes with fear, prejudice, and discrimination. I was aghast as I read your poetic recounting. Your imagery was so succinct and powerful " echoes of horror. The ending was indeed a powerful reminder that our horrific deeds will haunt us in ways we can't foresee. Awesome poem...! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/25/2024 5:39:00 PM
Sara, thank you. It’s amazing that the unimaginable happens every day, and sone how are routines drown it out, favoring what our ears and eyes have grown accustomed to, Cheers, Don
Date: 4/25/2024 4:12:00 PM
Don, you have done an excellent job of examining the tragic effects of baseless hate on both the offender and the target. You have articulated the precariousness of life and the critical importance of understanding and caring.
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Date: 4/25/2024 5:36:00 PM
Sotto, thank you! All while we wait for our train…Cheers, Don
Date: 4/25/2024 9:55:00 AM
Hello Don, I loved how you dig deep into the complexities of human interaction, revealing the layers of prejudice and misunderstanding that lurk beneath the surface. It's a great exploration of the consequences of unfounded hatred and its devastating impact on both the perpetrator and the victim. Your words reflect life's fragility and the urgent need for empathy and understanding in our interactions with others. Wonderful! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/25/2024 11:09:00 AM
Hi Daniel, Thank you for the kind and thoughtful comments. Cheers, Don

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