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Many thanks to Charmaine for collaborating with me on this poem about two people who grow old.  You can't go back to how it used to be as you age, but you can embrace what you have to make the most of life.

 

Take me there to yesterday's Summer night. Walking on the beach, sand between our toes, hair blowing in the breeze. When ripples in the sea, slowly cleansed the sand, tickling our toes, washing away our footsteps. On the edge where ocean meets land, shoulder to shoulder we sat, listening to calm splashing waves, our tanned skin soaking wet. As stars twinkled in the horizons, reflecting against the rushing tide. It seemed as they had arrived to be placed inside your eyes. Gazing at the sun sink into the sea, fireflies flickered as embers kept us warm. Affectionately we embraced nature's silence, with only the sound of our hearts beating. Too frail are these feet to stroll along those shores. but you remain harboured within my heart. Together we've seen many waves kiss dry sands, but unlike unfaithful tides, you still hydrate my soul. We yearn to end it that way, to be taken back to yesterday's summer night, but are content building sandcastles, along current coastlines.
15 August 2018 Silent One collaboration with Charmaine Chircop

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Date: 4/30/2020 11:50:00 AM
Super collaboration! It's like a perfect mix of coffee and creamer. Wonderfully written by two wonderful poets.
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Date: 10/27/2018 12:25:00 AM
Hi Silent, this is a wonderful collaboration by Charmaine and yourself. Two talented poets sing as one and a priceless jewel is born. The content sings to me. I love the way your pens have merged seamlessly. Two poets writing with one pen. I love the content of the write, such beauty held within the words. A definite fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:50:00 AM
Lovely
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Date: 9/17/2018 1:10:00 AM
This is a brilliant and fantastic collab poem! Loved it. Favoriting it! -JWE
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Date: 9/1/2018 7:20:00 AM
Wonderful intertwining of talented poetry, SO and Charmaine:)
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Date: 8/30/2018 5:55:00 AM
Exceptional poetry by two immensely talented poets that I consider to be my friends! I not roaming this site to read much poetry lately, missed this brilliant gem! You both write together so very well and so evident of giving from true poetic hearts!!!! A fav,, a precious jewel.
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:01:00 PM
Excellent collaboration. You guys work well together! I just can't bring myself to read your latest one. (yet)
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Date: 8/24/2018 11:18:00 AM
Oh Silent One, I love this! It brings me to a place I haven't quite discovered yet.
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Date: 8/23/2018 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations for this lovely & emotional love poem. One can sense the days gone by and memories of such days at the beach.
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Date: 8/22/2018 4:38:00 AM
When beautiful words can transport me to a place and allow me to "feel" the water and sand, the sun, the love ... This is the kind of poetry I love! A winning collaboration! ~ Judy
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Date: 8/20/2018 11:01:00 PM
You two are hot.. this is such an amazing write. It’s e reread reread! Loved you SO!!
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:33:00 PM
Hello Silent One, it is impossible to go backwards in life. But we can remember the good times we had back then. We can remember the unforgotten shores that gave us pleasures. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:20:00 PM
Such a beautiful portrait of an enduring love which stirs a sea of emotion as so many of us now know this experience. Compliments to you both !!!
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Date: 8/19/2018 3:25:00 PM
this is so cute and beautiful, I love it! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 8/19/2018 7:43:00 AM
A very lovely and serene collaboration from both of you!
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Date: 8/18/2018 7:31:00 PM
on top of the shelf from the two of you... splendid depiction of growing old contently, S.O. and charms...huggs
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:02:00 PM
If you're contented SO...that's cool... I'm romancing like a stone... good luck to the sea...A lovely romantic write of reminiscing by you both...All the best
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Date: 8/18/2018 8:53:00 AM
As yesterday's memories float away with breeze, they still remain "harboured within the heart"..Beautiful collaboration Charmaine and Silent One..
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:03:00 PM
So beautifully worded and moving! Janice
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Date: 8/17/2018 9:53:00 AM
A great collaboration :)
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Date: 8/17/2018 9:44:00 AM
You two write well together. Bravo.
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:11:00 AM
Such a creative, vibrant and amazing poem and the collaboration is exhilarating. Thanks for sharing! -JWE
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Date: 8/16/2018 4:09:00 PM
Many thanks goes out to you Silent One.Its been so long since my last collaboration..and I'm glad I was given this opportunity to collab with you.It was a pleasure and an honour.Thanks for your patience and will to work so greatly as a team.Loved every second of it..Charma.
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:56:00 AM
Lovely words, hand in hand through time. Well done you two, well done...
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/16/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Charlie x
Date: 8/16/2018 5:42:00 AM
Si and Charmaine, what a beautiful collaboration, each stanza more lovely than the previous one. I have just returned from a lovely holiday where I watched the most amazing sunsets over tranquil topaz seas, watched couples walk hand in hand, gazing into each others eyes, mesmerized, this poem reflects all that and more. Excellent you two, and a fave for sure....Maria Hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/16/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Maria x
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