Notes About The Poem

Many thanks to Charmaine for collaborating with me on this poem about two people who grow old.  You can't go back to how it used to be as you age, but you can embrace what you have to make the most of life.

 

Unforgotten Shores

Take me there to yesterday's Summer night. Walking on the beach, sand between our toes, hair blowing in the breeze. When ripples in the sea, slowly cleansed the sand, tickling our toes, washing away our footsteps. On the edge where ocean meets land, shoulder to shoulder we sat, listening to calm splashing waves, our tanned skin soaking wet. As stars twinkled in the horizons, reflecting against the rushing tide. It seemed as they had arrived to be placed inside your eyes. Gazing at the sun sink into the sea, fireflies flickered as embers kept us warm. Affectionately we embraced nature's silence, with only the sound of our hearts beating. Too frail are these feet to stroll along those shores. but you remain harboured within my heart. Together we've seen many waves kiss dry sands, but unlike unfaithful tides, you still hydrate my soul. We yearn to end it that way, to be taken back to yesterday's summer night, but are content building sandcastles, along current coastlines.
15 August 2018 Silent One collaboration with Charmaine Chircop
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Brul Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Super collaboration! It's like a perfect mix of coffee and creamer. Wonderfully written by two wonderful poets.
Raven Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 12:25 AM
Hi Silent, this is a wonderful collaboration by Charmaine and yourself. Two talented poets sing as one and a priceless jewel is born. The content sings to me. I love the way your pens have merged seamlessly. Two poets writing with one pen. I love the content of the write, such beauty held within the words. A definite fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Inman Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Lovely
Breidenthal Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:10 AM
This is a brilliant and fantastic collab poem! Loved it. Favoriting it! -JWE
Daniel Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Wonderful intertwining of talented poetry, SO and Charmaine:)
Lindley Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 5:55 AM
Exceptional poetry by two immensely talented poets that I consider to be my friends! I not roaming this site to read much poetry lately, missed this brilliant gem! You both write together so very well and so evident of giving from true poetic hearts!!!! A fav,, a precious jewel.
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Excellent collaboration. You guys work well together! I just can't bring myself to read your latest one. (yet)
Johnson Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Oh Silent One, I love this! It brings me to a place I haven't quite discovered yet.
Maier Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations for this lovely & emotional love poem. One can sense the days gone by and memories of such days at the beach.
S     Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 4:38 AM
When beautiful words can transport me to a place and allow me to "feel" the water and sand, the sun, the love ... This is the kind of poetry I love! A winning collaboration! ~ Judy
Man Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 11:01 PM
You two are hot.. this is such an amazing write. It’s e reread reread! Loved you SO!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Hello Silent One, it is impossible to go backwards in life. But we can remember the good times we had back then. We can remember the unforgotten shores that gave us pleasures. Have a nice day my friend.
Gentile Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Such a beautiful portrait of an enduring love which stirs a sea of emotion as so many of us now know this experience. Compliments to you both !!!
Michelle Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:25 PM
this is so cute and beautiful, I love it! Love, Juli-Michelle
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:43 AM
A very lovely and serene collaboration from both of you!
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:31 PM
on top of the shelf from the two of you... splendid depiction of growing old contently, S.O. and charms...huggs
Michael Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 3:02 PM
If you're contented SO...that's cool... I'm romancing like a stone... good luck to the sea...A lovely romantic write of reminiscing by you both...All the best
May Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 8:53 AM
As yesterday's memories float away with breeze, they still remain "harboured within the heart"..Beautiful collaboration Charmaine and Silent One..
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:03 PM
So beautifully worded and moving! Janice
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:53 AM
A great collaboration :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:44 AM
You two write well together. Bravo.
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Such a creative, vibrant and amazing poem and the collaboration is exhilarating. Thanks for sharing! -JWE
Chircop Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Many thanks goes out to you Silent One.Its been so long since my last collaboration..and I'm glad I was given this opportunity to collab with you.It was a pleasure and an honour.Thanks for your patience and will to work so greatly as a team.Loved every second of it..Charma.
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Lovely words, hand in hand through time. Well done you two, well done...
Chircop Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Thanks Charlie x
Williams Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Si and Charmaine, what a beautiful collaboration, each stanza more lovely than the previous one. I have just returned from a lovely holiday where I watched the most amazing sunsets over tranquil topaz seas, watched couples walk hand in hand, gazing into each others eyes, mesmerized, this poem reflects all that and more. Excellent you two, and a fave for sure....Maria Hugs
Chircop Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Thanks so much Maria x
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