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UNFORGETTABLE WEEKEND

It was a spectacular autumn Friday afternoon like no other. We hopped in a cab to rush home for a fun night to kick off the long weekend. Less than an hour into it, we had to call an ambulance and that was the end of that. Our best friend was suddenly dying of a brain aneurysm. cheated weekend robber cruel death cometh AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 11, 2020 for contest LET THE PENS FLOW - HAIBUN sponsored by JENISH SOMADAS

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Date: 8/11/2020 9:32:00 PM
Sad that's all I can say. God bless that man.
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Date: 8/11/2020 10:36:00 PM
Absolutely, thanks ~
Date: 8/11/2020 9:04:00 AM
Oh my. You have captured the shock so well in this write. Well done! xomo
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Date: 8/11/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen ~
Date: 8/11/2020 7:14:00 AM
oh line i hope this is fictional ... these things happen so suddenly:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2020 10:27:00 AM
no such luck ~ but it happened over 15 years ago.