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"Unfold the days of spring sunshine and the awe of black and gold velvet wings of happiness." Quote by poet The amber broad horizon runs over the countryside While nascent painted pattern clouds open up wide. A little girl beams in her pink dress, trimmed in white lace, Black patent shoes, and her auburn hair across her face. Runs across the countryside of wild red bee balm As the abundant blooms unfold in silence of the calm. Black and gold velvet butterflies flit in aromatic spring Air enjoying the warmth of the sunlight it does bring. 4/15/2023

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Date: 4/30/2023 6:00:00 AM
Back with congratulations Eve, i just knew it was a winner! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:06:00 PM
No need for the photo with this one Eve. You painted it with your words. A joy to read:)
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Date: 4/19/2023 9:50:00 AM
This i see as a definite win Eve, my friend. Your poetic charm enhances all your poems. I hope you and your magic pen write soon again. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:54:00 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:05:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Beautiful and I love the image and your quote !
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:06:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem, Eve... I put this at the top of the winners list - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:33:00 PM
A very beautiful nature scene is picturesquely unfolded. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/18/2023 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...EVE
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:32:00 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win Eve :)
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Date: 4/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write/quote/picture.  Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 4/18/2023 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Eve. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.
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Date: 4/17/2023 4:11:00 PM
I love the imagery of the little girl in the second stanza. There is an abundance of gratitude in your quote, dashing!
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Date: 4/17/2023 3:51:00 PM
Eloquently written entry for the contest, Eve. The painting and the imagery of your poem are made for each other. Good luck in the contest! The poetry is exquisite, my friend. Have a joyful sprind day, Bill
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Date: 4/17/2023 3:24:00 PM
you just shared with me a pocket full of sunshine, with your beautiful well placed words Eve, God bless you love xo
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Date: 4/17/2023 8:18:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Eve. I'm faving it. Best of luck in contest!
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Date: 4/16/2023 6:45:00 AM
Lots of beautiful imagery in the feel good poem Eve. A picture painted perfectly. :)
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