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Unfold

"Unfold the days of spring sunshine and the awe of black and gold velvet wings of happiness." Quote by poet The amber broad horizon runs over the countryside While nascent painted pattern clouds open up wide. A little girl beams in her pink dress, trimmed in white lace, Black patent shoes, and her auburn hair across her face. Runs across the countryside of wild red bee balm As the abundant blooms unfold in silence of the calm. Black and gold velvet butterflies flit in aromatic spring Air enjoying the warmth of the sunlight it does bring. 4/15/2023
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Proxenos Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Back with congratulations Eve, i just knew it was a winner! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Turner Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 8:06 PM
No need for the photo with this one Eve. You painted it with your words. A joy to read:)
Proxenos Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 9:50 AM
This i see as a definite win Eve, my friend. Your poetic charm enhances all your poems. I hope you and your magic pen write soon again. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
La France Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Beautiful and I love the image and your quote !
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 2:06 AM
- A really beautiful poem, Eve... I put this at the top of the winners list - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 8:33 PM
A very beautiful nature scene is picturesquely unfolded. Congratulations!
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...EVE
Fowler Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win Eve :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write/quote/picture.  Have a blessed day.................
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Eve. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.
Anaya Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 4:11 PM
I love the imagery of the little girl in the second stanza. There is an abundance of gratitude in your quote, dashing!
Baker Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Eloquently written entry for the contest, Eve. The painting and the imagery of your poem are made for each other. Good luck in the contest! The poetry is exquisite, my friend. Have a joyful sprind day, Bill
Rose  Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 3:24 PM
you just shared with me a pocket full of sunshine, with your beautiful well placed words Eve, God bless you love xo
Peck Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:18 AM
This is so beautiful, Eve. I'm faving it. Best of luck in contest!
Fowler Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Lots of beautiful imagery in the feel good poem Eve. A picture painted perfectly. :)
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