Undeserved Reward

It pains me to confess the unadulterated truth, Once I strung together some distantly related words [and by that, I mean “really” distantly related, too!] And, tongue-in-cheek, submitted to a poetry contest Which, surprisingly, I won … First Place! Feeling rather badly about my obnoxious behavior Which was rewarded so bountifully with applause I tried to convince the sponsor I was only spoofing, I was trying to make a point [no one wanted made] Surprisingly, I got a note … of thanks! Feeling even worse, I decided to decline the prize. I wanted to do the right thing, in my way of thinking, So, I tore up the sponsor’s check and threw it away I wrote telling them what I had done, and I got Surprisingly, another check … with thanks! By now, I was completely over the whole situation Which began with my twisted way of making a point So, I cashed the check and spent the prize money, And winding up the matter with a generous gesture, Surprisingly, I sent them a note … “Thanks!”
written February 2, 2022

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Date: 2/20/2022 10:11:00 AM
I know the feeling; one never knows what others may think is good writing or poetry. I obviously misjudge some of the things I write as better than they are, or worse than they are. I liked the twist in this poem though. Write On! my friend, Bill
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Date: 2/4/2022 10:54:00 AM
Speaking only for myself, I see that many poems that I merely 'toss off' late at night turn out be quite popular. (Granted, some are real duds)... Interesting write, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/4/2022 11:02:00 AM
I know what you mean, gw. Thanks for your comment. This idea would have lent itself better to a short story, I think, but I'm not inclined to write short stories these days. Too much effort; too little reward! (Soup Mail)
Date: 2/3/2022 6:34:00 PM
Your honesty deserved the reward. I, like Tom, thought it was true. Take care Shirley
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2022 7:12:00 PM
Shirley, thank you so much for your thoughtful and considerate response to my poem. I really appreciated it.
Date: 2/3/2022 12:52:00 PM
Spoof or not it was well deserved. Enjoyed your story Milton, I almost believed it until I read it was fiction lol. Tom
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Date: 2/3/2022 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I have always felt the mark of good fiction is that it is believable. This makes me proud...no, pleased. Thanks!
Date: 2/3/2022 7:57:00 AM
That prize money was ultimately meant to be yours!
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Date: 2/3/2022 8:55:00 AM
I suppose so, but I felt it was so undeserved because of the poem I submitted. Apparently the judges liked it!
Date: 2/2/2022 1:55:00 PM
That was good of you, Milt, a conscionable act rewarded just the same, Aloha!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/2/2022 2:15:00 PM
It's all fiction, William, but I must admit I have been tempted to try it on here. Hope you're having an Aloha day yourself!
Date: 2/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
Milt, great write, fun to read too, glad you finally cashed the cheque ~ Constance
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Date: 2/2/2022 1:33:00 PM
LOL. Pure drivel, Constance. Pure drivel! I did have a similar thing happen, though. (Soup Mail)
Date: 2/2/2022 1:25:00 PM
oh so witty Milt, doubt anyone would pay me for me poop but i will try and do a book lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2022 1:34:00 PM
I think you should, Jan. I swear, I would buy it in a heartbeat. Thanks for your thoughts.
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