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Underwater Blues

Blue, for love of the depressed days Underwater I live or die Nowhere can I really hide Bewildered the water dismays Sky absorbs the winter hunger A floating bird doesn’t blunder Sadness pulls me under and lays Casts spells of confusion bequeath Leaves me to fall, sink underneath I’m frozen with sorrow always Constantly I am beaten down To hold the great ocean god’s crown I do not hear what the sea says While keeping me there with sadness I must have strength to rid of stress With all my strength I start to pray Not knowing if there’s any hope I see that I must stand and cope Blue, for love of the depressed days Bewildered the water dismays Sadness pulls me under and lays I’m frozen with sorrow always I do not hear what the sea says With all my strength I start to pray Russell Sivey Form Constanza(?)

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Date: 1/27/2013 4:33:00 PM
hey is their a constanza contest going on? that is the form of my good friend connie!! wonderful.
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:35:00 PM
an utterly magnificent poem with intense emotion ...something different for u Russell luv but far superior .. a premier write of poetic essence .. so great to read u my friend ..thankxx for prayers and sweet comments during my health crisis ..on slow mend but will try to be on more as health allows.. wonderful words ..
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:20:00 PM
I believe what you have here meets all the requirements of a constanza poem. It is interesting reading.
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:56:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..These are not the easiest to write but you did good..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:46:00 PM
Dear Russell, the night’s darkness will not last as dawn’s rays of hope are close by! Soon you will come out of the water to breath the fresh air of a new beginning! Your verses, regardless the mood, are powerful and provoking. Thank you for sharing!
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