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Understanding The Dream

After the dance she enjoyed her dream.
Understanding her soul’s message.
She listens carefully with heart.
She is nurtured by her angels.

Understanding her soul’s message,
Loving instant enthusiasm.
She is nurtured by her angels,
They revel in her excitement.

Loving instant enthusiasm,
She listens carefully with heart.
They revel in her excitement.
After the dance she enjoyed her dream.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/6/2019 5:01:00 PM
Hi Caren Love this...thanks. Instant enthusiasm is best always. The rhythm to this one is terrific.. Love, Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2019 11:22:00 PM
Thank you my friend. It is a style I do not often try, tricky at first but once I was on a roll, I really enjoyed doing a pantoum.
Date: 3/6/2019 3:53:00 AM
Wish my dreams were as pleasant. I only have nightmares.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2019 2:43:00 PM
Victor, here is the key. Eat your favorite foods every day, and never after 5:00 p.m. Drink only water after five, and concentrate on your loved ones in heaven. They will meet you in your dreams.
Date: 3/6/2019 1:23:00 AM
lovely written- Understanding her soul’s message,/Loving instant enthusiasm.////yeah; understand the message of the soul by the pure love of realizing
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2019 2:47:00 AM
I wanted to try a new type of poem. I rather like the cyclical feeling of the pantoum.