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Understanding the Dream

After the dance she enjoyed her dream. Understanding her soul’s message. She listens carefully with heart. She is nurtured by her angels. Understanding her soul’s message, Loving instant enthusiasm. She is nurtured by her angels, They revel in her excitement. Loving instant enthusiasm, She listens carefully with heart. They revel in her excitement. After the dance she enjoyed her dream.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/6/2019 5:01:00 PM

Hi Caren Love this...thanks. Instant enthusiasm is best always. The rhythm to this one is terrific.. Love, Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2019 11:22:00 PM

Thank you my friend. It is a style I do not often try, tricky at first but once I was on a roll, I really enjoyed doing a pantoum.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/6/2019 1:23:00 AM

lovely written- Understanding her soul’s message,/Loving instant enthusiasm.////yeah; understand the message of the soul by the pure love of realizing

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/6/2019 2:47:00 AM

I wanted to try a new type of poem. I rather like the cyclical feeling of the pantoum.