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Under the Willow

What if the winter crawls too slow toward a melting Spring, what if the willow be buried alive under the wight of a weeping sky? A long deep sigh fills the land, with the whites of numbed eyes. Snow flows in and out of a hollow stump. What if the world quite forgot to turn in its grave, and under the willow, there unseen, underneath that veiled mistress of time, were heaped mounds of frozen shoes, and none warm enough left to fill them?

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Date: 1/12/2024 10:21:00 AM
I really like this one, Eric..although I must say that I'm rather loath to find out the answer to those questions.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 1/12/2024 1:50:00 PM
Thank you for the positive feedback, Jim. I agree, best not want/need to find out! All the best JD.

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