Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

Under the Shade of Flowers

We lay so close with the warm smell
of spring and lilacs..
We share kisses and moments in the 
view of bright yellow daisies..
The shadow of a cascading row of roses
umbrella our hidden time..
And under this beautiful array of colors
we cherish our love forever..
As an audience of flowers applaud with a
fragrance and matched love and yearning..





"Flowers" contest
written by Michael J Falotico

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2011 at 8:00 AM Congratulations Michael on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol

Eiken Laan February 8, 2011 at 7:44 AM Beautiful love in the shade of flowers, love this:))

Robert Pettit February 6, 2011 at 1:26 PM Michael, congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write.

Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2011 at 6:46 PM Congratulations here ,... and ((thank you))..p.d.

Kory Calhoun February 5, 2011 at 12:14 PM Hi Michael - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2011 at 2:56 PM Lovely lines Michael as always enjoyed... hope u will enter my new contest just posted today luv... know your time is busy now but it runs till March 1st... stay safe my dear friend..with luv.. your Jersey Girl ..forever...

Daver Austin February 1, 2011 at 10:15 AM Beautiful audience. Beautiful Piece. Love, Dave

Carrie Richards February 1, 2011 at 7:57 AM I love that the audience of flowers applaud your love! Wonderful, Michael...just wonderful! Congratuations! Love, Carrie

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2011 at 7:18 AM adorable, michael.. and heads up to you for a real smashing win! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2011 at 5:49 AM Congrats to my White Knight of P.S. for a brilliant win in the Flowers contest with this impressive and exciting write and entry luv.. enjoy another chart topper well deserved .. just arrived home from 'paradise' to snow ice cold ..oh well it is February and how far can Spring be now? stay safe Michael.. your Jersey Girl forever with luv..

Joyce Johnson January 31, 2011 at 10:46 PM A lovely interpretation of the contest. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich January 31, 2011 at 8:21 PM this was so deliciously yummy. If flowers and poems were pizza,this would be my fav pepperoni! Congratulations, Michael. and a highest rating. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan January 31, 2011 at 7:51 PM Such beauty, such enchantment.Many congratulations for this win.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 31, 2011 at 6:26 PM Congratulations on nthe third place win in the contest, Michael

Carolyn Devonshire January 31, 2011 at 6:18 PM Michael, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts January 31, 2011 at 6:05 PM lovely poem you've penned Michael congrats on your third place win in my contest

Carolyn Devonshire January 30, 2011 at 1:05 PM The lilacs, the daisies, the roses -- so many beautiful flowers add a special aura to this poem, Michael. Wishing you success in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau January 30, 2011 at 5:00 AM Beautiful write dear poet ! Soft and charming ! much love, james

Nette Onclaud January 30, 2011 at 4:32 AM oh my, michael... i feel the subtle uey glowing energy of this piece! winning wishes yo you!! :) huggs, nette

Christine A Kysely January 29, 2011 at 9:59 AM Beautiful and well constructed images! Good Luck in the Contest Michael! Christine

Carrie Richards January 29, 2011 at 9:26 AM Oh....this is so romantic....should perhaps be printed out as a Valentine gift to the one you love........how wonderful would that be? !! :)

James Fraser January 29, 2011 at 8:12 AM Dreamy poetry Michael, oh to be in this position. Good luck in the contest....:)

Wilma Neels January 29, 2011 at 6:27 AM A lovely shade to have Michael.. I reckon this is a stunning entry for the contest hun.. Love Wilma

The Situation January 29, 2011 at 5:49 AM very romantic but my snow says other wise. T. S.

Kash Poet January 28, 2011 at 6:05 PM Nice romantic write!Enjoyed your poem Michael--kashinath

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