Under the Laden Clouds Nursery Rhyme

Listen to the Ladybug laugh;
Lingers and crawls up the giraffe’s
Long legs and neck, holding a staff.
Love to get its lips on the light chaff;
Later delights on a leaf for a late lunch.

Lazy near a log by the lake for a lush brunch,
Lamb, lion, and calf lie and   munch
Limiting little for later to the bunch.

12/6/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/8/2024 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful Alliteration, Dear Eve. I am getting inspired! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 12/21/2020 12:59:00 AM
Such an enchanting alliteration dear Eve! you did it your majestic way!
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Date: 12/15/2020 10:02:00 AM
Ahh how peaceful lovely Lady! Not sure I'm capable right now. Will think on it ;)
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Date: 12/14/2020 10:21:00 AM
I love alliteration. So sure to try your contest. Hugs.
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Date: 12/10/2020 10:49:00 AM
A very good example for alliteration, Eve. I'll have to put my thinking cap on :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/9/2020 4:09:00 PM
Nice example for your contest! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/9/2020 4:34:00 AM
- A great example for your contest, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2020 11:39:00 AM
lovely alliteration and rhyme thanks for the contest prompt I will see if i can come up with something for you:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2020 9:19:00 AM
Love your L-iteration featuring animals.
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Date: 12/6/2020 11:33:00 PM
Lifting up is this muse of yours... leaving me smile, so let me thank you for this example while led to compose one. May the Lord's blessings be with you.
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Date: 12/6/2020 11:22:00 PM
Great alliteration. ~~
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Date: 12/6/2020 6:26:00 PM
awesome alliteration example for us, dear Eve! Thanks for all your comments. I wish I had time to see more poems here. I got so behind on my day!!!
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Date: 12/6/2020 12:05:00 PM
Eve, I love this and what a great example for your contest, I will try my best _Constance
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Date: 12/6/2020 6:14:00 AM
Lovely verse... God bless you always
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Date: 12/6/2020 5:10:00 AM
Smiling as I read this cutie!
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