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Under a Full Moon Sky

She sits on the jetty Under a full moon sky Wondering why Just wondering why Her lover, her man Has been lost at war Why was he there What was he fighting for In a distant place So far from their home He was taken from her In her mind she combs Can she face tonight Will she bear tomorrow Her heart's been wrenched In heartfelt sorrow As she sits on the jetty Under a full moon sky To all the others who have lost Will they ever wonder why? http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-3.php

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Colleen Bono

Date: 12/2/2009 2:49:00 PM

It's kind of like my poem.under the moonlit sky.

Logan Saucillo

Date: 11/10/2009 12:21:00 PM

touching. nice work. keep putting the pen to the paper!

Deborah Herber

Date: 11/6/2009 6:46:00 PM

I don't know how you do it but you bring such emotion and life to yur work! I love it. You are my inspiration!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2009 3:40:00 PM

Seems that you have captured the feelings of this person very well. It is almost as if I was there with her. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2009 2:48:00 PM

I can feel the loniliness as this young lady sits under a fulll moon sky,the pain heartache of losing someone close to the heart,asking WHY>I ask that quesion all the time James..deep poem..excellent--Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2009 2:36:00 PM

Oh James this is so beautiful and war is hell and makes lives sad ... u phrase all your words so lovingly actually allowing the reader to feel her pain... bravo Highlander.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"