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Under a Bridge on a Hot Summer's Day

There are few places now where life can find respite on hot summer days. Shady spaces are contested real estate beneath trees and in the shallow waters under a bridge where countless plump, pink jellyfish congregate to hide from the heat. Thousands gather, pulsing in the warm brine. They look like brains that have escaped from skulls, their severed spinal cords now lethal clumps of thread hanging down to entangle the unwary. The species is thriving in the warming waters. These jellyfish have no eyes to see ahead. To them, all is now by nudge and touch. No thoughts of consequence or compassion trouble their gelatinous will, no desire to share halts their inexorable spread. To them there is only an unquestionable need. They have infiltrated our space, children of our kind, servants to a common greed.

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Date: 1/6/2024 5:17:00 PM
liked the metaphor here...comparing the mindless mob to sightless, mindless jellyfish with no thought of consequences or responsibility. Your words are powerful and provide visual perspective. Am faving this one for its wisdome. Have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/7/2024 8:45:00 PM
The mob mentality has always been a threat to the preservation of values and common sense. Restraint is sacrificed on the bonfires of emotion...dangerous. As always Sara, look forward to your thoughtful and informed comments...value your support. Take care..
Date: 1/6/2024 10:03:00 AM
Jellyfish are sightless blobs, huddled under a bridge... reminds me a different sort of creature who congregate beneath bridges... shady places for brainless minds. A bit of an "out of the water" piece by you, but it widens my perspective of your thoughts, Paul.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2024 8:44:00 PM
Safety in numbers kinda thing, Paul. ;-) Let your thoughts fly wherever they choose. Stifling them could be injurious to your health!
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/7/2024 8:39:00 PM
Unfortunately my thoughts fly everywhere...hard to contain within perspectives. Many thanks Lin for daring to visit that space under the bridge....felt safe in yr company . Regards, Paul
Date: 1/6/2024 8:25:00 AM
Ah, the mob mentality at its primeval best. Nicely done Paul, but too sadly true on too many levels
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/7/2024 8:32:00 PM
Indeed...the environment is ripe for such swarming. Appreciate yr comments John. Regards

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