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Uncurable Pain

I found myself swamped in my room, with no one around,, My eyes are raining heavily since he left me alone, My breath is playing since he went miles long.. I found myslf lost in thousand memories we made, Which empowers my tears to d cascade.. The one was that the last we made, To the worse happened to us that day,, He was in my lap with his last breath, And I was trying to save his life.. He was screaming to save him, I was bursting with tears to help him. Nobody around only he and i. And suddenly his breath left us saying good bye.. I screamed, cried, but nobody listened.. Only his sole leaving him gave us taunting smile.. And I was left with no choice to let it go, n making me alone. Flowers was covering him, Leaving thorn pierced in my eyes. I found myself swamped in my room too many times, With all people around, but nobody mine...

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Date: 2/22/2016 11:21:00 PM
Rupali Singh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:19:00 PM
happy new year
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:30:00 PM
Rupali,, Congrats.. SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 6:11:00 PM
there will be no as painful as to lose someone we love... I love your poem. and thank you for joining in my contest!!! CONGRATULATIONS, Rupali!!! :O))
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