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Uncrushed by a crush

Just saw the dog on his walk as I walked the other way I crossed to say hello and ask about his travels He wouldn't leave the spot where he stood until I was out of sight So I blew him kisses and walked away backwards I'm now walking along smiling Like I've just seen my top crush Think I'll hold onto this feeling I'll perhaps write him some poetry later

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/14/2025 12:35:00 PM

What breed was your crush? Awwn so cute! Such an adorable poem, so well described of your day out and your encoubter with this gorgeous dog! I freak out when dogs stare at me altho they are cute. You definitely should write a poem as you can turn anything into poetry: pleasure reading this , sending you light

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/14/2025 1:12:00 PM

Haha he was so cute (he's actually my dog) as he was in shock to see me walking along and then concerned that I didn't walk back with him. He's a chihuahua/french bulldog cross - so like a chihuahua that got into body building lol