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Unconditonal Love

The black water reflects the still morning
Monarchs flutter and dance in rising sun
Purple skies grow lighter without warning
Separate rain, as rainbow colors run
Could I have seen a more beautiful sky?
Silently approaching your silhouette
My eyes well slowly in their joyous sigh
You sit alone, playing your clarinet
There's no vision or reflecting water
That warms my heart as this picture of you
A quivering heart for you, my granddaughter
As you practice in tune with a sky so blue

I am a witness to your gentleness
I feel the music your soul can express

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 9/7/2015 10:02:00 PM
Frederic.. A wonderful winning write, I salute you!
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:47:00 AM
Congrats on yet another win Frederic!
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:40:00 PM
Frederic.. a belated congrats on this wonderful winning write!
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:45:00 AM
Ah the pure love of a sweet this is, Frederic. Congrats!
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:02:00 AM
Oh great write Frederic, unconditional true love so well penned, a solid 7, Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:58:00 PM
Frederic. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:59:00 AM
Sweetness personified! Frederic! Bravo again! jmg
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:19:00 PM
Wow...I was touched..;-)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/11/2014 10:27:00 PM
thank you Donna for your kindness
Date: 3/29/2014 10:37:00 AM
Awesome imagery. ..Beautiful write!
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Date: 3/28/2014 7:23:00 PM
She must be very happy for you to write this for her. Which sonnet is your Cornish Sonnet Fred? Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/28/2014 8:34:00 PM
It's titled The Fragile Rose, and yes she was..though she was only 3 and it was a toy she was playing, I read it to her, she listened but most likely didn't understand, she will when older and I give it to her then...
Date: 3/26/2014 3:29:00 PM
What a beautiful feeling you evoke. She must be one very special grand daughter
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2014 9:25:00 PM
Both my granddaughters are special....but yes