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Unconditional Love

Unconditional love of every one 'Tis the secret to success Long as you follow a simple rule ~ Do it to excess November 07, 2019 Pithy Pome Poetry Contest N/A - Judged November 14, 2019 Writing Challenge - December - Any Poem N/A'd in November 2019 Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wilshkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2019 7:02:00 PM

Gershon, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, well done !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2019 8:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your generous assessment of this poem, D.H. Much appreciated. Seasons best, Gershon

Greg Gaul

Date: 12/9/2019 7:13:00 AM

Gershon, this is a very big idea. You do it justice and impressively. A brave bit of brevity. The song of every sentient moral leader of modern times and ancient times as well for those who study such things. To pack it in to four simple lines is masterful. Kudos kudos.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for such a detailed analysis and generous assessment of this short poem, Greg! Appreciated! Seasonal Joy! ~ Gershon

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 12/8/2019 2:42:00 PM

Shining in its simplicity. You have chosen a few burnished words again, Gershon. Well done!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/8/2019 3:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for this ringing endorsement, Geoffrey! Season's best, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2019 8:03:00 AM

A great way to live - then there would be no more wars, no more lies, - love thy neighbor as thyself. Crime would lessen and we would give to the poor - a Utopia! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:10:00 PM

Wow! Utopia! --- and even if not, all those who gave and many of those who received unconditional lives would be living enriched spiritual-emotional lives. Thanks for sharing your insights, Jennifer! Peace and Joy, Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/9/2019 7:01:00 AM

Such a wonderful thought Gershon, Just be a lover !! Happy Saturday ( in the chill!)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:11:00 PM

There you go, Mike: Love makes the world go round! Thanks for the positivity. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2019 4:25:00 AM

Unconditional love done to excess. Don't you know this could lead to world peace?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:12:00 PM

Whoa, thanks for the reminder, Caren!! Sure wouldn't want anything as dangerous as world peace to break out!! I'd better delete this poem --- right after the Messiah comes, OK?! Smiles, Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/9/2019 1:05:00 AM

Gershon a smile but not from a funny read but from a great read that touches the heart!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:12:00 PM

That's funny, Brenda.... Seriously, your comment has now touched my heart. Thank you, dear friend. Cheers, Gershon

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/8/2019 5:27:00 PM

Hi Gershon, love can move the world. A wonderful write my friend. The world is ever a better place when love is allowed to shine. Have a wonderful Saturday when it comes. Your friend....Mike. XX

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:13:00 PM

Your words are added inspiration, Mike! Thank you for the LOVEly comment! Peace and Joy, Gershon

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2019 3:59:00 PM

Love IS the answer, Gershon. If there were more love in this world, we'd see less crime and poverty. What a clever epigram, grounded in truth! Best wishes in Maureen's contest, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:14:00 PM

Carolyn, your lovely comment and support is greatly appreciated. May your words go straight to G-d's ear, and be realized! ~ Cheers, Gershon

Ann Foster

Date: 11/8/2019 9:40:00 AM

Wonderful. Ann

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:08:00 PM

One word of positivity is worth 1,000 pictures. Thanks, Ann! Smiles, Gershon

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/8/2019 8:39:00 AM

This is GOOD...I like it...Write on All Walls

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:08:00 PM

Alright. I'm getting out the paintbrush, or should I say graffiti chalk, right now. Thanks, Arturo. Smiles, Gershon

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/8/2019 7:57:00 AM

Hi Gershon, love the content of this write. I enjoyed the read my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend....Mike.Good luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:07:00 PM

Mike, I appreciate your taking the time to comment on this one. Very happy to see your avatar, my friend! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/7/2019 11:12:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:06:00 PM

Great, Line. Thank you so much! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2019 9:42:00 PM

WoW! Gershon, Your " Epigram" pops! Great message within your poem. I really enjoyed reading this tonight. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Off to the poem that inspired you:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:06:00 PM

Thank you for your unbridled enthusiasm, Alexis. It, and you, are so refreshing. Here's to inspiration! Smiles, Gershon

Hello There

Date: 11/7/2019 9:36:00 PM

xoxox

Hello There
Date: 11/8/2019 10:17:00 PM

Lol. Ha! Thought this might confuse you.. hehehe. I wasn't feeling like saying much yesterday, but wanted to respond to your lovely gesture. Just a simple token of my appreciation, my sweet friend ;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2019 2:05:00 PM

I plead complete ignorance. Were those kisses sent my way? Thanks, H.T. ~ Ignoramus in Chicago, LOL