Uncle's Chair

Those long days gone by
in wisps of Autumn fields
how rare that it was at
Uncle Paul's in  October.
He kept the orchard smooth as horse skin,
the grass cleanly mowed.
And the sidesteps were trimmed and
neat, no weeds in his backyard grew.
Sitting within this hunk of splendor
was his cozy cottoned hammock,
a cradle that welcomed me 
to lie under a mantle of clouds.
How he would hand out bread-sticks 
that were crunchy as his laughter
watching the ivy drop on our shoulders,
then he would sleep in his patio chair
thinking he would never get old--
yet he murmured lightly of warm endings.


For Poet Destroyer A
100 in a ROW contest --3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Callus Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:16 AM
I decided to take a look at your first offering on Soup, Franco, and I can assure you that i am definitely not disappointed! ~ Regards // paul
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Franco, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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July 11, 2016 at 4:17 PM
A lovely nostalgic write, Franco! Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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July 9, 2016 at 4:29 AM
Franco, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
Rogers Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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April 9, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Touching writing Franco, but well done. Like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
Madonsela Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 1:54 PM
i felt invited in the story you. Told i like it.
Bauer Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 1:23 PM
this is very touching. i like it!
A   Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 8:46 AM
thanks for sharing
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:53 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Franco. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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