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Uncle's Chair

Those long days gone by in wisps of Autumn fields how rare that it was at Uncle Paul's in October. He kept the orchard smooth as horse skin, the grass cleanly mowed. And the sidesteps were trimmed and neat, no weeds in his backyard grew. Sitting within this hunk of splendor was his cozy cottoned hammock, a cradle that welcomed me to lie under a mantle of clouds. How he would hand out bread-sticks that were crunchy as his laughter watching the ivy drop on our shoulders, then he would sleep in his patio chair thinking he would never get old-- yet he murmured lightly of warm endings. For Poet Destroyer A 100 in a ROW contest --3

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Date: 9/1/2019 7:16:00 AM
I decided to take a look at your first offering on Soup, Franco, and I can assure you that i am definitely not disappointed! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Franco, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:17:00 PM
A lovely nostalgic write, Franco! Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:29:00 AM
Franco, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 2/3/2014 8:24:00 AM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:24:00 AM
Touching writing Franco, but well done. Like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:54:00 PM
i felt invited in the story you. Told i like it.
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Date: 2/20/2012 1:23:00 PM
this is very touching. i like it!
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:46:00 AM
thanks for sharing
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:53:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Franco. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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