Uncharted Waters

An ocean tumbles through dreams of you. In depths unknown, I float above. Oh, how I long to dive beneath your surface, yet I am timid in matters of love. If brave, I’d have shown you the whole of my gushing heart, no less than tides of bliss. Seeking depths unknown, I long to dive beneath your surface. Searching your eyes, I want for treasures lost on the ocean’s floor. The sun, like a gold coin, drops, splashing this face of regret. I blush in secret thoughts of you and turn away from the endless shore. A swoop from seagulls catches the light of your smile and breaks the hush of late sky. Turning away from the endless shore of regret, I blush. My lonely shore may flood, a wish to bathe in the caress of you granted. I shall break from fear, to brave a rolling river between us. Down current, I’ll swim until I reach your ocean of sparkling blues. I would drown in the waves of your uncharted waters. Glorious would be death in the caress of you, your uncharted waters…glorious. Written, 1/18/2015, for Craig Cornish's Manassian Quintain Contest,
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Kaufman Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:40 AM
HI there Ms. Rhonda, I know this was one of your older pieces but so well written, You took me to the ocean with it. It could be my only trip there this season. Definitely a fav for me.
Hamilton Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:55 PM
I love the way this flows Rhonda, no wonder it's on the top best 100 of all time, reminds me of my song sea of love, similar metaphor
Pederson Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 10:37 PM
fathomless write. much imagery and feelings obtained from this. bless you your write. a Fav.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:57 PM
Hello Rhonda Johnson - Saunders, I have enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice evening my friend,
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:50 PM
It is always a delight to read your creative poetry. I adored this one! : )
Arnone Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Beautiful allegory. Love the undersea images.... :-)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:58 AM
"I would drown in the waves of your uncharted waters." What lovely flow of tender sincerity. When I grow up; I wish to paint the way you do, until... Lovely weekend to you, dear one.
A  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
Lamoureux Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations.
Eaton Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations Rhonda. Such a great write. Janet
A. Sharma Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:11 AM
Such a passionate beauty Rhonda! Congrats on big win!
May Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Congrats on your win Rhonda
Haight Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to congratulate you on your 1st Place win for this beautiful and so romantic poem! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:53 PM
I love that you turned your theme into such a romantic poem......simply breathtaking it is, Rhonda! So nice to share this placement with such fine poets!! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xxx
Smith Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Rhonda, breathtaking and so romantic.. You combined two of my favorite things.. romance and the ocean... well done, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Ramage Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Wow, that was great. I see you are writing wonderful poems. Keep up the great work. Sincerely Lee
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:22 PM
wowowow, amazing and I see it was poem of the day as WELL as having reached top three spot on most popular poem currently! Congrats, Rhonda. I admired the way you carried words over to the next line. My age is showing because the name of that literary device is totally escaping me at this moment. Probably will pop into my brain the minute I post this. BIG SEVEN on this one.
Nunez Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 6:44 AM
Gloriously beautiful, Rhonda. Blissfully romantic. Congratulations...7 and to fav! Kim Patrice :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 8:12 PM
absolutely beautiful and breathtaking Rhonda in every way... You make the reader like me experience the gush and hush of the water.. :)! I love specially the second stanza!!! the repeating lines are a wow.. each line is a magnet both on the senses and to the imagination!!! :D! a fave for me and A7 and more!----olive eloisa
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 8:14 PM
weeeeeeeeeee hugs.. :D!
Zerbst Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Absolutely brilliant Manassian quintain! It has your unique touch about it. The best I can say what I am trying to is that it is gushing with goodness.
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Wow! Rhonda, this is excellent, romantic, beautiful; a 7 rating and a fav for me! Love the imagery, and the repetition worked very well. In my books, already a winner! // paul // Oh...I see that congrats are also in line for POTD!!
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Although entering charted waters, there's the movement of the waves. For in this caressing movement, there may just be a crave. For if these waves reach so pure, then allow such waves to face. Then live these charted waters, and allow such waves to grace. So beautiful Rhonda, mega hugs for this gem, James :) x
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January 22, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Wow, reading your comment, I just caught my HUGE typo...more like a brain fart...still waiting for the day I can charter water...thanks for the congrats and wake up call. Hugs, Rhonda
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 7:03 AM
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Congratulations on poem of the day!
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January 21, 2015 at 3:20 AM
This is beautiful, romantic and sweet. I love how you decide to follow the current of love and to experience the depth of emotions. Lovely write, Rhonda. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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