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Uncertainties-Bite Size Poetry

I swam in a river of uncertainties, as Mr moon gave me his back. Somber dreams caress my skin, the light within my eyes is dark. On my last trip to the milky way, I was sad, because it had melted. 2-20-19 Resubmitted:5/28/2021 Contest: Bite Size Poetry Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/26/2019 6:00:00 PM

A trip to the milky way, a interesting thought. An unpleasant man in the moon, sad. Lovely verse. Congrats for the honor of POTD!

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/25/2019 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on having your wonderful truly honored s POTD! A fav..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2019 10:54:00 AM

So, my friend, NOW are you going to enter this terrific poem in the contest. Once again: Entre vous...! :) gw

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/24/2019 11:59:00 AM

Hi Gershon, What contest? The contest is judged and over. I'm glad you like the poem my friend. I'm glad stopped by and have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2019 10:41:00 PM

Uncertainties are poignantly reflected in the emotional richness and beauty of your imagery, Alexis. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Jack Webster

Date: 2/23/2019 9:31:00 PM

Love the image of swimming through the moon and the milky way. I'm really surprised it didn't place. Glad it got POTD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2019 12:38:00 PM

Alexis, this is so deserving of POTD and it's so unfortunate that Nina had only ten winners because THIS , my dear, deserved a win!!

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/23/2019 11:25:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and emotion from your poignant poem, Alexis! I see it made POTD! Congrats to you! :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/23/2019 8:24:00 AM

Hi Alexis, dropping back with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/23/2019 6:50:00 AM

The reflection of uncertainties...nicely done. Congrats on POTD!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/23/2019 5:30:00 AM

Alexis, awesome imagery! Congratulations on POTD!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/22/2019 11:18:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts hold many emotions indeed. ~ Brandy

Nick Trim

Date: 2/22/2019 9:59:00 PM

congrats on potd :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/22/2019 5:48:00 PM

Nicely done, Alexis, you painted a perfect picture. Congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/22/2019 4:11:00 PM

Life is full of uncertainties, Alexis, we all have them. Nicely penned verse my friend. Congrats on POTD. John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2019 2:10:00 PM

Alexis, Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTD! : ) xxoo

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/22/2019 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations to you for a mystical feeling poem.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 2/22/2019 9:02:00 AM

Strategically straight and decoratively simple and meaningful poem, Congratulations Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 9:05:00 AM

Hi Okonkwo, I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/22/2019 8:32:00 AM

Very cool, ethereal feel, gem of a poem Alexis, congratulations on POTD! :) xomo!

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:35:00 AM

Hi Maureen, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate and for wishing me luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/22/2019 8:32:00 AM

& good luck in the contest!

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/22/2019 8:10:00 AM

Excellent entry! Alexis...and Congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^...{*J*}

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:36:00 AM

Hi WW, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. Love and light right back at ya:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 2/22/2019 7:47:00 AM

An emotive write..Congrats on POTD Alexis..

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:38:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2019 7:41:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats on your POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:38:00 AM

Hi Jan, I appreciate you coming back to congratulate me:-) Alexis

John Lawless

Date: 2/22/2019 7:15:00 AM

...so lick you fingers and thank the Milky Way for sharing.....very intriguing metaphor for the topic of this contest

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:41:00 AM

Hi John, Thank you very much for leaving such a comment:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2019 7:09:00 AM

Congrats Alexis on poem of the day..splendidly done.

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:44:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/22/2019 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD with this great poem :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:45:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Bobby May

Date: 2/22/2019 5:19:00 AM

What a wonderful poem my friend great Job Alexis!! Back to say Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/22/2019 8:47:00 AM

Hi Bobby, Thank you very much my friend. I wasn't expecting this at all. However I appreciate the honor. I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis