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Uncertainties-Bite Size Poetry

I swam in a river of uncertainties,
as Mr moon gave me his back.
Somber dreams caress my skin,
the light within my eyes is dark.
On my last trip to the milky way,
I was sad, because it had melted.




2-20-19
Resubmitted:5/28/2021
Contest: Bite Size Poetry
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Sandra L. Weiss Date: 2/26/2019 6:00:00 PM A trip to the milky way, a interesting thought. An unpleasant man in the moon, sad. Lovely verse. Congrats for the honor of POTD! Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 2/25/2019 7:31:00 AM Congratulations dear friend on having your wonderful truly honored s POTD! A fav.. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/24/2019 10:54:00 AM So, my friend, NOW are you going to enter this terrific poem in the contest. Once again: Entre vous...! :) gw Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/24/2019 11:59:00 AM Hi Gershon, What contest? The contest is judged and over. I'm glad you like the poem my friend. I'm glad stopped by and have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Susan Ashley Date: 2/23/2019 10:41:00 PM Uncertainties are poignantly reflected in the emotional richness and beauty of your imagery, Alexis. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Jack Webster Date: 2/23/2019 9:31:00 PM Love the image of swimming through the moon and the milky way. I'm really surprised it didn't place. Glad it got POTD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2019 12:38:00 PM Alexis, this is so deserving of POTD and it's so unfortunate that Nina had only ten winners because THIS , my dear, deserved a win!! Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 2/23/2019 11:25:00 AM Beautiful imagery and emotion from your poignant poem, Alexis! I see it made POTD! Congrats to you! :) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 2/23/2019 8:24:00 AM Hi Alexis, dropping back with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/23/2019 6:50:00 AM The reflection of uncertainties...nicely done. Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 2/23/2019 5:30:00 AM Alexis, awesome imagery! Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 2/22/2019 11:18:00 PM Congratulations Alexis, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts hold many emotions indeed. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Nick Trim Date: 2/22/2019 9:59:00 PM congrats on potd :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/22/2019 5:48:00 PM Nicely done, Alexis, you painted a perfect picture. Congratulations on POTD and good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

John Gondolf Date: 2/22/2019 4:11:00 PM Life is full of uncertainties, Alexis, we all have them. Nicely penned verse my friend. Congrats on POTD. John Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/22/2019 2:10:00 PM Alexis, Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTD! : ) xxoo Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 2/22/2019 9:32:00 AM Congratulations to you for a mystical feeling poem. Login to Reply

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu Date: 2/22/2019 9:02:00 AM Strategically straight and decoratively simple and meaningful poem, Congratulations Alexis. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 9:05:00 AM Hi Okonkwo, I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/22/2019 8:32:00 AM Very cool, ethereal feel, gem of a poem Alexis, congratulations on POTD! :) xomo! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:35:00 AM Hi Maureen, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate and for wishing me luck in the contest:-) Alexis Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/22/2019 8:32:00 AM & good luck in the contest!

Winged Warrior Date: 2/22/2019 8:10:00 AM Excellent entry! Alexis...and Congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^...{*J*} Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:36:00 AM Hi WW, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. Love and light right back at ya:-) Alexis

Joseph May Date: 2/22/2019 7:47:00 AM An emotive write..Congrats on POTD Alexis.. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:38:00 AM Hi Joseph, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Jan Allison Date: 2/22/2019 7:41:00 AM dropping back with my congrats on your POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:38:00 AM Hi Jan, I appreciate you coming back to congratulate me:-) Alexis

John Lawless Date: 2/22/2019 7:15:00 AM ...so lick you fingers and thank the Milky Way for sharing.....very intriguing metaphor for the topic of this contest Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:41:00 AM Hi John, Thank you very much for leaving such a comment:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/22/2019 7:09:00 AM Congrats Alexis on poem of the day..splendidly done. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:44:00 AM Hi Vijay, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands Date: 2/22/2019 6:00:00 AM Congratulations for POTD with this great poem :) Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:45:00 AM Hi Heidi, I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Bobby May Date: 2/22/2019 5:19:00 AM What a wonderful poem my friend great Job Alexis!! Back to say Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 2/22/2019 8:47:00 AM Hi Bobby, Thank you very much my friend. I wasn't expecting this at all. However I appreciate the honor. I appreciate you stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

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