Unbidden Love - Ca

"the anguish of grief leaves me with an appetency and yearning for peace . . . " the allure of love was enchanting the promise between us a delicate flower love was like a guest unbidden well-timed and auspicious for my heart was a ravaged garden and you knew how to soothe and calm me how to assuage my fears and the scars on my soul faded we lay cuddled 'till the crack of dawn sometimes you would look at me awry with a crooked smile and your laughter was music for my soul now . . . I hang my head like a wilted rose and the memory of time is my heavy cloak for I am broken since that dreadful day the pain atrocious and brutal you left me for heaven and I scream why . . . the wind blows in trees like the wail of violins and I stand in the summer, the fall, the winter and spring staring at your engraved name in stone and the clouds float in the sky and the birds sing me a sad and dreamy song for years and years I have been chained to your tomb but today, I absolve me I set me free . . . and I forgive you, my love for leaving 'cause I understand that it was not yours for the choosing but had been written . . . in the book of time ______________________ October 13, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Unbidden Love Copyright Protected, ID 19-1188-348-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Crazy A's sponsor, John Hamilton First Place

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Date: 11/4/2019 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations! Love has so much beauty and pain in it. Guess it all part of life and living........
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Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2019 11:30:00 AM
Paula thanks for the congratulations and for the comment!
Date: 11/3/2019 6:54:00 PM
wow...powerful and painful....exquisite write my friend....kudos on your top win! hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2019 12:53:00 PM
Sandra thank you so much for the compliment on my writing !
Date: 11/3/2019 6:54:00 PM
This was so beautiful dear heart congrats on a great win!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2019 12:54:00 PM
Brenda thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations!
Date: 11/3/2019 6:13:00 PM
This is undoubtedly your best write Constance, congrats on a top win! I love this poem and am saving it!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2019 12:57:00 PM
John thank you for the awesome compliment and for my placement!
Date: 10/16/2019 12:14:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this one left me choked up. An amazingly beautiful write, Dear Heart ~ a fave...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/16/2019 8:57:00 AM
Hello, thank you so much for visiting and the beautiful and for the compassion and the FAV !
Date: 10/14/2019 8:50:00 AM
Excellent entry my friend...John is going to have a hard time with this contest...all the best Constance...^WW^ :o)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:52:00 PM
WW, thanks for the excellent and the compliment !
Date: 10/14/2019 12:56:00 AM
This is beautiful and such a winner. I love it. God bless you with much love and prayers, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:53:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the beautiful and the love !
Date: 10/13/2019 9:11:00 PM
Lovely, Dear Heart, I love the line, "I hang my head like a wilted rose" good luck in the contest .. Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:53:00 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the lovely and the compliment !
Date: 10/13/2019 8:51:00 PM
You can say it had been written...but thank God I was sent to heaven... I can feel your emotions...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/14/2019 1:54:00 PM
Arturo, thanks for visiting and commenting, I have written it a thousand times and still the wound is bleeding ~
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