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October- 23- 2023
This or That, Vol.21. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh
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Her birth was never trumpeted, Nor caught any media headlines. Born to Joachim in very ordinary settings, Virgin Mary, the simplest of the simple, Was specially chosen to perform a task divine. As she grew up, she pledged to keep her body and soul, Free of all blemish and stains of fleshly desires. But in her teens, she was betrothed to Joseph, Perhaps, part of a divine plan. Did dreams come to nab her sleep, no one knows! She found joy in prayer and absolute surrender to God. Once when in silent communion with God, Hearing the flap of wings overhead, she looked up. Seeing the flash of blinding light in her dim lit room She stood in dazzled astonishment, Not knowing what was about to happen. Before her, appeared a winged seraph. A radiant silhouette with such gentleness n’ grace Its hands raised in benediction, Saluted Mary and said, “Blessed art thou amongst women… …………………………………… The rest she heard in a trance. Unable to digest what was said, The girl looked up nonplussed. Again, it said, “The Holy Ghost shall come upon thee, And a son shall be born of thee, Whom you shall call Jesus.” “How can this be”, The question lingered but didn’t ask. In that nanosecond of a new revelation Did Mary’s world shatter like glassware? Or did her virgin womb thrill with new life? Did she swim in the waters of joyful tidings? Or gyrate in the sweeping swirl of tidal waves? For a girl already espoused to a man In whose dreams his comely form had begun Flitting in and out, Was it a moment of silent ravishment? Or of stupefied bewilderment Did a dagger cut through her heart? Or did her soul take wing in flight??? Without questioning, She surrendered to the will of God, Thereafter, never wavered nor bemused, But readied herself for the great task. Forever she remains a symbol of mercy and love. Her immaculate grace is reflected on her radiant face. Her lovely visage having greater beauty than any flower, Emits sweet fragrance that perfumes our souls. Remaining ever so pure with no trace of sin, She is acclaimed by Christians all over the world, As a symbol of unassailable purity and godly grace!

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Date: 11/11/2023 7:06:00 PM
You are SO prolific, can write on any matter with such ease...liked it very much.
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:43:00 AM
Linking the concept of unassailable Purity with Mother Mary and through a beautiful biography, you have brought in a very beautiful theology. Congratulations! You are okay after your ailment, I hope!
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Date: 11/12/2023 7:39:00 AM
Chris, I am advised to limit the use of my computer for sometime, not to strain my eyes. Let me see if I can oblige.
Date: 11/9/2023 7:46:00 PM
Simply brilliant, Valsa. Every line is a beauty! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
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Date: 11/12/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward for placing my poem as one of a top win .
Date: 11/8/2023 11:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem of truth, love how you bring this all together: )
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Date: 11/3/2023 10:04:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Valsa. A lovely written poem of the mother of God's only begotten Son. Bless you for sharing this beautiful and inspiring story through your poetry. Great entry, no luck needed. IMHO. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 10/30/2023 10:57:00 AM
"Before her, appeared a winged seraph. A radiant silhouette with such gentleness n’ grace Its hands raised in benediction, Saluted Mary and said, “Blessed art thou amongst women…" "Remaining ever so pure with no trace of sin, She is acclaimed by Christians all over the world, As a symbol of unassailable purity and godly grace!" -- Wonderfully told! Blessings my friend! God be with you always.
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Date: 10/24/2023 7:43:00 AM
You must be Christian, and as a muslim i must say , I absolutely love how you’ve written about the story of Mary, her divine supreme purity, a form of purity today we read about and talk about, and iv never read a poem like this about her , which flow in such delicate and sweet tenderness … I especially loved “ Before her, appeared a winged seraph.” “ Hearing the flap of wings overhead, she looked up. Seeing the flash of blinding light in her dim lit room” wow brilliant storytelling! Fave
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:22:00 PM
Simply wonderful. God bless you with a win. love, Gina
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:14:00 PM
Now this is a very clever take on the contest and so well expressed.. Mary is not only revered in Christianity, but other religions also.. you told her story so poetically and with so much tenderness... your poem flows so beautifully and is enjoyable to read... good luck in the contest..
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Date: 10/23/2023 10:52:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, you have so tenderly and beautifully retold the story of Mary in the simplicity of her life and with the impact of a simple three letter word - "Yes." Your poetry sings with the grandeur of The Magnificat - Mary's song. Thank you for this beyond beautiful poem as we come into the season of Advent and Christmas. This soulful poem is melodious! Blessings to you my sweet poetry friend.
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Date: 10/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
All the characters were chosen by God to do the divine work. God knew who on this earth would accept His plan. You have done a very good job of writing in poetic form about Mary the mother of Jesus. Both Mary and Joseph had to be able to trace their heritage line back to Abraham and Sarah so God could use them. God has a plan for our lives if we only would do His will. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/23/2023 4:41:00 AM
a stunning creation, Valsa!! Your poem shined beautifully and eloquently as you recounted Mary's 'unassailable purity...' with such sincere and humble emotions. I'm in awe of your poetic ability. am faving this one, enjoy Monday, Sara
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Date: 10/23/2023 2:14:00 AM
- It happened in those days ... the time had come for a birth - There was a young woman who herself says she was became pregnant without having been with a man - An impossible thought for many - but makes sense to many - Beautifully written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/23/2023 1:57:00 AM
The recount of the Annunciation always is a marvel for me. I learned not to ask for knowledge. Abraham left for an unknown place without asking anything, so Our Lady is justified in believing without asking. Blessings.
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