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Unanswered Questions

how she longs to escape
carefree pack a bag
leaving all behind

hop on a train and run 
straight into the arms
that hopefully long for her

as if she really dares
be transported by visions
of flambéed passion

not really knowing if
she too fills his daydreams
with lustful longings

does she haunt his nights
so he too fights desires that rattle
and deprive his sleep

does he secretly long to possess her
feverishly amorously
the way a lover should

she didn’t go looking for him
they somehow found each other
their lives meshing intertwining

her heart seeming ripe
for a train ride to adventure
and long distance romance



AP: 2nd place, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:22 AM
"not really knowing if she too fills his daydreams with lustful longings wondering if she too haunts his nights and fills his fantasies" Wow! and WOW! I am not old enough to read this one! WOW!
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:42 AM
lol ~ PG-13
Lawless Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Line, as I read this I could hear the hum of the train station and feel the longing of a lover's hopes. Beautifully written.
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much, John, most appreciated ~
Skelly Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 3:59 AM
Soul mates will always find each other...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 5:11 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Delice ~
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