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how she longs to escape carefree pack a bag leaving all behind hop on a train and run straight into the arms that hopefully long for her as if she really dares be transported by visions of flambéed passion not really knowing if she too fills his daydreams with lustful longings does she haunt his nights so he too fights desires that rattle and deprive his sleep does he secretly long to possess her feverishly amorously the way a lover should she didn’t go looking for him they somehow found each other their lives meshing intertwining her heart seeming ripe for a train ride to adventure and long distance romance AP: 2nd place, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on August 11, 2021

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Date: 8/17/2021 1:22:00 AM
"not really knowing if she too fills his daydreams with lustful longings wondering if she too haunts his nights and fills his fantasies" Wow! and WOW! I am not old enough to read this one! WOW!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:42:00 AM
lol ~ PG-13
Date: 8/12/2021 6:02:00 AM
Line, as I read this I could hear the hum of the train station and feel the longing of a lover's hopes. Beautifully written.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2021 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, most appreciated ~
Date: 8/12/2021 3:59:00 AM
Soul mates will always find each other...Delice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2021 5:11:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Delice ~

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