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* My brilliant, hard-wroking, honest Dad ... my hero. *

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“Thin, I think, that fabric between realities. Maybe minds aren't lost. Maybe they just slip through and find a different place to wander.” - C.J. Tudor ~ oh, I shan't yet, my dear father, find disease has robbed him of his mind he works hard, grasping from the air some careful tasks that are not there most life, his world was quite exact no straining id - no questioned tact integrity worth cheers and boasts Vs though now he sits engaging ghosts he walked a road that’s naught but true and strived for all things great men do his loved ones’ welfares - always first providing needs through best and worst his partner, church, his town and friends placed ‘fore himself, what he’d defend through his devotion, work and fun of enemies - I’ve known NOT ONE. it's odd that I can I count it strange but not once did he find that range to laud a thing that gave me pride (or boost the dreams I kept inside) I strained thru life to reach this man some common ground to understand but while I’d begged to be his friend too great our difference, in the end I'll not e’er know this man, you see though none I love quite dear as he but as our bond, at best, was rough he’d taught me love by being tough so now his wit and poise have flown the grandest man I’ve never known no grace is left him, this goodbye no answers, mine, the question … why?!? ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge 2, July 2019 - Melancholy" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 7/30/2019 9:14:00 PM
Greg, you penned a beautiful heart felt poem full of love, sadness, loss and grief. So sorry for this difficult time in your life. Hugs and blessings my friend.
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Date: 7/25/2019 4:51:00 PM
such a touching poem Greg, a very well merited first place:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2019 8:25:00 AM
I don't understand it...I thought I commented on this one...ditto to everyone else's comment. You know this one touched me ...and why. Love is expressed in various ways, some don't really understand it. (Love that is)
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Date: 7/25/2019 9:04:00 AM
I used one of your titles in my 20 titles poem, hope it's ok!
Date: 7/25/2019 6:32:00 AM
Greg, this touched me.
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:26:00 PM
Greg, thank you for sharing your heart with us. A fav for me. ~Mark
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Date: 7/24/2019 11:54:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional poem, it truly touched my heart as I know it is based in reality, somewhere inside your dear father is the love you so wanted and he could not say, well done ~
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Date: 7/24/2019 8:46:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 7/23/2019 7:52:00 PM
Hi Gregory: Your poem deeply touched me on a personal level as I am going through the throes of hearing loss or hopefully not dementia.The demons of reality will catch us all but we should all leave some kind of legacy in any form so we won't be forgotten. A great poignant poem!
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Date: 7/23/2019 6:37:00 PM
It is a huge question. Why this happens to some and not to others. Why they have to suffer for so long, not even really realizing what is wrong. It's a terrible dilemma. I see you were using kind of an older style, doing inversions with your words! Anyway, the poem has a lot of heart and I enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 7/23/2019 8:20:00 AM
So many parents, especially fathers think they need to be strict, where I imagine spare the rod spoil the child came from. I learned this way from my only parent, my mother. "He taught me love by being tough" beautifully expresses how we learn how to better express love to our own children because of yearning for that love as we grew up without it. I understood the depth of that kind of pain that shapes our life in giving love freely. A truly beautiful poignant Poetry gift.
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:50:00 AM
Gregory. I am speechless. You said it all. What measly words can I add? None! The pictures of your Father are truly dear. Unfortunately, our ends are far from kind. Panagiota
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:59:00 AM
Powerful, heart tugging pen Greg, hugs my friend. xomo <3
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:50:00 AM
This seems to be many a mans lament about his father...and women as well. I didn't get to know my own father until later in life and I had to make a big effort for it wouldn't have come from him. I love your poems honesty about such a tough experience...and yet love happened in spite of his distance. This is a another great poem Gregory.
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:19:00 AM
I truly love this deep and beautifully composed poem. Memory loss is a great curse and it destroys those precious memories that give us such great joy. This is heartfelt poetry born from a true poet's heart... A great fav and a shining gem as well...
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